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Hell Sink He
Happy Anniversary
it could have been the fifth
but you told me to let you be
give me time and space
living with her
your so-called ex
or is she still married
bound with a platinum ring
waiting for the hammer
to fall, I lived in limbo
I moved out, you were never there
now I love another
he will inherit
old used merchandise
but my love will be fresh
as a newly fallen snow
I will sing for no one
but he
I will live for nothing
but for his love
if he discards me like you did
at least I have loved
and was loved
even for a while
as always.
it could have been the fifth
but you told me to let you be
give me time and space
living with her
your so-called ex
or is she still married
bound with a platinum ring
waiting for the hammer
to fall, I lived in limbo
I moved out, you were never there
now I love another
he will inherit
old used merchandise
but my love will be fresh
as a newly fallen snow
I will sing for no one
but he
I will live for nothing
but for his love
if he discards me like you did
at least I have loved
and was loved
even for a while
as always.
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16th Jul 2014 5:17am
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re: Re: Hell Sink He
16th Jul 2014 8:51am
Re: Hell Sink He
16th Jul 2014 1:13pm
The title also seems to refer to the city
of Helsinki, and the poem bears the cold
dark despondent aura of the midnight sun
of Helsinki, and the poem bears the cold
dark despondent aura of the midnight sun
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re: Re: Hell Sink He
16th Jul 2014 2:54pm
You are discerning, absinthe...they are cold aren't they, the people. And the place is colder. Thanks for reading:) kind comments too.
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Re: Hell Sink He
16th Jul 2014 3:46pm
Sweet words Grace..."atleast i once loved and was loved". It's an experience to die for. Goodluck...
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16th Jul 2014 3:58pm
Re: Hell Sink He
16th Jul 2014 3:47pm
LOVE the play on words here... Like the commenter above inferred I too thought instantly of Helsinki... Such a strong piece my sweet one! :)
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16th Jul 2014 3:58pm
Re: Hell Sink He
16th Jul 2014 11:46pm
Hehehehe Witty Title Dear Grace!!!
(I'm just catching up on my updates-waayyyy behind) and just saw this-Sad that such folks have to enter our lives and steal what we give true-as they do so with lies upon their lips-sad tale with an ending of gold!!!
Good Luck in the Comp.!!!
(I'm just catching up on my updates-waayyyy behind) and just saw this-Sad that such folks have to enter our lives and steal what we give true-as they do so with lies upon their lips-sad tale with an ending of gold!!!
Good Luck in the Comp.!!!
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17th Jul 2014 2:00am
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24th Jul 2014 3:51am
Thank you so much for dropping by and reading as well as leaving lovely comments, Zazzles...:)
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