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"Allure"
those that speak of it plainly
understand the concept and allure
but if merely a dream or fantasy
these fail to physically touch or deliver
until you experience ultimate control
the transfer of power offered in submissive
perfection Mastered by One proficient
capable of completely satisfying
your hardcore lust, should you trust
placing your breath within a tight choker
granting your flesh entirely as an offering
knowing He may blindfold, spread, bind, fill
tease, deny, flog, clamp, lick, bite, thrill
your soul, exposing it to an autocratic regime
then your body, in lecherous fornication and debauchery
as you comprehend, He first penetrated
your spirit long before you chose to knock
upon the door where dreams meet reality
*July 11, 2014*
**written from inspiration provided by My little cutie**
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Re: "Allure"
16th Jul 2014 2:16am
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16th Jul 2014 7:56pm
Re: "Allure"
Anonymous
16th Jul 2014 3:35am
"placing your breath within a tight choker
granting your flesh entirely as an offering
knowing He may blindfold, spread, bind, fill
tease, deny, flog, clamp, lick, bite, thrill"
^^^SHAT! Talk about alluring!^^ ;)
granting your flesh entirely as an offering
knowing He may blindfold, spread, bind, fill
tease, deny, flog, clamp, lick, bite, thrill"
^^^SHAT! Talk about alluring!^^ ;)
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16th Jul 2014 7:59pm
:D Ms Rain, you continually entertain.
Poetry, comments, replies, all enjoyed and
sincerely appreciated. :)
Poetry, comments, replies, all enjoyed and
sincerely appreciated. :)
Re: "Allure"
16th Jul 2014 4:15am
Hmmmmm....Mr Vegas u have a way of putting thoughts n our heads. Extremely hot write
Hugs
Belle
Hugs
Belle
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re: Re: "Allure"
16th Jul 2014 8:04pm
You are most kind, Ms Belle. :)
I am very grateful for your RL nod and gratifying remarks.
I am very grateful for your RL nod and gratifying remarks.
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16th Jul 2014 8:53am
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re: Re: "Allure"
16th Jul 2014 8:10pm
Holding your comments and addition
to your RL in high regard. Thank you.
Soooo pleased, kitten, to assist you
in blurring said lines. :)
xo
to your RL in high regard. Thank you.
Soooo pleased, kitten, to assist you
in blurring said lines. :)
xo
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16th Jul 2014 9:22am
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Well, kate, happy to know you are buying in. :)
Your flattering remarks are met with sincere gratitude.
Honored to be among your RL choices.
xo
Yes, she is worthy of abundant thanks. :)
Thank you.
Your flattering remarks are met with sincere gratitude.
Honored to be among your RL choices.
xo
Yes, she is worthy of abundant thanks. :)
Thank you.
Re: "Allure"
"then your body, in lecherous fornication and debauchery
as you comprehend, He first penetrated
your spirit long before you chose to knock
upon the door where dreams meet reality"
indeed!!! my my my.. pass the fan.. I need a glass of water.. mouth went dry as other parts went.....wellll.. let's just say.. very HOT write.. truly enjoyed :) with love and respect..xoxo domore
Ima hafta take out a loan for all the bills I wish to rain upon this one.. LOL :)
as you comprehend, He first penetrated
your spirit long before you chose to knock
upon the door where dreams meet reality"
indeed!!! my my my.. pass the fan.. I need a glass of water.. mouth went dry as other parts went.....wellll.. let's just say.. very HOT write.. truly enjoyed :) with love and respect..xoxo domore
Ima hafta take out a loan for all the bills I wish to rain upon this one.. LOL :)
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re: Re: "Allure"
16th Jul 2014 8:28pm
Dear lass, a fan and pitcher of cool water await.
Towels available upon request. :)
My sincere appreciation for your HOT comments
and the gracious addition to your RL. Tis an honor.
My loan rates are very affordable. But, you may be
dealing with a devil. ^..^ :)
Thanxx
xo
Towels available upon request. :)
My sincere appreciation for your HOT comments
and the gracious addition to your RL. Tis an honor.
My loan rates are very affordable. But, you may be
dealing with a devil. ^..^ :)
Thanxx
xo
Re: "Allure"
16th Jul 2014 9:02pm
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17th Jul 2014 2:20am
Rosetta, thank you for reading and taking the time
to share such an encouraging reaction. :)
to share such an encouraging reaction. :)
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17th Jul 2014 1:09am
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re: Re: "Allure"
17th Jul 2014 2:30am
LOL! Thank you, ES. :)
Always appreciate your excitement
and your taking the time to share it with me.
Not sure I'm all that, Sweetness. But, it is
humbling and flattering you think me so.
She has a tremendous spirit, great personality,
and she's a cutie. Tis I who is fortunate. :)
Thank you.
xo
Always appreciate your excitement
and your taking the time to share it with me.
Not sure I'm all that, Sweetness. But, it is
humbling and flattering you think me so.
She has a tremendous spirit, great personality,
and she's a cutie. Tis I who is fortunate. :)
Thank you.
xo
Re: "Allure"
18th Jul 2014 2:21pm
This Allure is powerful.....the fact that it's inspired by your cutie makes it extra special.
I love it
I love it
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22nd Jul 2014 9:24pm
Always appreciate the love and your
encouraging words, Ms Lena.
Muchas gracias.
encouraging words, Ms Lena.
Muchas gracias.
Re: "Allure"
21st Jul 2014 9:49pm
I blushed as I read this....great work here. Made me think of...things. :) Nicely done.
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re: Re: "Allure"
22nd Jul 2014 9:29pm
Many thanks for your kind words, mysteriouslady.
Appreciate your taking the time to read, then share gratifying comments and positive reactions. :)
Appreciate your taking the time to read, then share gratifying comments and positive reactions. :)