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freedom
i realized what has changed
i feel that flutter in my heart
the skipp in the beat
the final sigh
you freed me from my past
chased away my bad dreams
opened my heart and let it beat
beat in freedoms of all
freedom from pain
freedom from anger
and most of all
freedom from fear
i feel that flutter in my heart
the skipp in the beat
the final sigh
you freed me from my past
chased away my bad dreams
opened my heart and let it beat
beat in freedoms of all
freedom from pain
freedom from anger
and most of all
freedom from fear
Published 12th Jul 2014
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22nd Jul 2014 7:29am
one line that drew my attention was, "the final sigh". Normally when the word final is used it denotes and ending. The rest of the poem however feels like a new beginning.
17th Aug 2014 1:45pm
JAZZMANOR
thanks for the comment. and the final sigh can be a new beginning if it is referring to a sigh of pain
emo1
thanks for the comment. and the final sigh can be a new beginning if it is referring to a sigh of pain
emo1
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