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master of dampness
master of dampness
Can you master me?
What about him (the big M otherwise known as JT)? Could he?
One plus one plus Mmm yes, that makes three...
Can the two together do me completely?
In bed
On the sheets
Spreadeagle I'm tied
One on top
Other bottom
Ooo baby, that's fine
How 'bout in the chair
Astraddle the first
Second buried deep
Snugged up behind
Caressing curves so luscious and round
I like on the floor
On hands and knees
One buried silken shaft stroking
Other cock in my mouth, hands in my hair
Both making it rock
Is it warm in here? Well, I'm definitely hot.
Master me?
Careful
I'm a switch
Told you that...
Master of dampness
I tell you what I'd like to see
one of you
In the other
The one in the middle
Buried in Me
him fucking him
And him fucking Me
Now we're getting started with what I'd like to see
Hmpf!
master of dampness, mastering Me?
Let Me get my whip
Now boys, kneel before Me
I'll tell you what
I'll whip for a while
Whew! getting hot? I am
So you'll please Me
Just as I desire
Manacles
Shackles
Butt plugs
Oil
If you're good
I'll let you touch
If not
Trussed you'll remain
To watch Me pleasure Myself
master of dampness, mastering Me?
Think again
Warned you once
'bout how I like to play
Can you master me?
What about him (the big M otherwise known as JT)? Could he?
One plus one plus Mmm yes, that makes three...
Can the two together do me completely?
In bed
On the sheets
Spreadeagle I'm tied
One on top
Other bottom
Ooo baby, that's fine
How 'bout in the chair
Astraddle the first
Second buried deep
Snugged up behind
Caressing curves so luscious and round
I like on the floor
On hands and knees
One buried silken shaft stroking
Other cock in my mouth, hands in my hair
Both making it rock
Is it warm in here? Well, I'm definitely hot.
Master me?
Careful
I'm a switch
Told you that...
Master of dampness
I tell you what I'd like to see
one of you
In the other
The one in the middle
Buried in Me
him fucking him
And him fucking Me
Now we're getting started with what I'd like to see
Hmpf!
master of dampness, mastering Me?
Let Me get my whip
Now boys, kneel before Me
I'll tell you what
I'll whip for a while
Whew! getting hot? I am
So you'll please Me
Just as I desire
Manacles
Shackles
Butt plugs
Oil
If you're good
I'll let you touch
If not
Trussed you'll remain
To watch Me pleasure Myself
master of dampness, mastering Me?
Think again
Warned you once
'bout how I like to play
Published 11th Jul 2014
| Edited 12th Jul 2014
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12th Jul 2014 5:04am
12th Jul 2014 6:37am
Now, THAT'S an interesting dialogue, JohnFeddeler, luv :-*! What IS, precisely the fine line betwixt erotica and pornography? Where is it crossed? Is there, then, solely pornographic poetry? Is this, indeed, it? What defines the genre? Is it its graphic nature?
Hmmm... I fear we have a conundrum, then, for is not the very nature of good art to challenge, nay even disturb, force us out of our complacent sensibilities into new awarenesses, adjacent possibilities, the incredible diversity presented within the universe? Ahhh, JohnFeddeler, luv, you spark an excellent topic for debate, indeed...
Thank you! :-*
Hmmm... I fear we have a conundrum, then, for is not the very nature of good art to challenge, nay even disturb, force us out of our complacent sensibilities into new awarenesses, adjacent possibilities, the incredible diversity presented within the universe? Ahhh, JohnFeddeler, luv, you spark an excellent topic for debate, indeed...
Thank you! :-*
12th Jul 2014 11:37pm
a hundred voices, a hundred different opinions; that debate would be endless. we write the poem that we choose to write, & sometimes the poem chooses us. we offer it to the curious & the hungry: let the audience gather as they may.
regardless of 'labeling' (a term that I do not support), every poem here in the underground, for one reason or another, needs to be here...
regardless of 'labeling' (a term that I do not support), every poem here in the underground, for one reason or another, needs to be here...
Hear, hear, JohnFeddeler, luv :-*, quite right you are, yet 'tis still a debate worth contemplating.
For one could say much the same with respect to the study of philosophy or for that matter nearly any question worth asking...
Nonetheless, I agree with you: let the audience gather as they may; we'll give them a roundelay.
For one could say much the same with respect to the study of philosophy or for that matter nearly any question worth asking...
Nonetheless, I agree with you: let the audience gather as they may; we'll give them a roundelay.
12th Jul 2014 8:18am
12th Jul 2014 8:38am
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12th Jul 2014 4:17pm
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Thank you, Snowcrystal, luv :-*. It rather is orgiastic... I am glad you enjoyed the poem. I enjoyed creating it. ;-)
Anonymous
12th Jul 2014 7:51pm
*Waiter?! Check please! ;)
"I like on the floor
On hands and knees
One buried silken shaft stroking
Other cock in my mouth, hands in my hair
Both making it rock" <--I'll have one of those please!
"I like on the floor
On hands and knees
One buried silken shaft stroking
Other cock in my mouth, hands in my hair
Both making it rock" <--I'll have one of those please!
12th Jul 2014 7:56pm
Why, thank you, RainC (rain1courtel), luv :-*! I thought, perhaps, a few of the women might like a bit of a feast...
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12th Jul 2014 8:58pm
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12th Jul 2014 9:14pm
Thank you kateA (seekingkate), luv :-*!
It IS rather difficult to choose, isn't it?
As for the guys, well, that IS the other question, now, isn't it?
Have I mastered them or are they still bound and, er busy?
Hmmm... :-*
Actually, that may be a couple more than another question, but who's counting under these circumstances?
It IS rather difficult to choose, isn't it?
As for the guys, well, that IS the other question, now, isn't it?
Have I mastered them or are they still bound and, er busy?
Hmmm... :-*
Actually, that may be a couple more than another question, but who's counting under these circumstances?
13th Jul 2014 1:40am
Besides your usual unique work, I found your spoken word delivery of it so great that I urge you to make this genre a vital part of your future postings. You make your words live, and make us all want to surrender ourselves to you in one sense or another.
13th Jul 2014 7:40am
Candycrier, luv ~
My gratitude for your words is tremendous! :-* I was experiencing some trepidation...
I shall consider your peerless words carefully. Again, thank you. :-*
My gratitude for your words is tremendous! :-* I was experiencing some trepidation...
I shall consider your peerless words carefully. Again, thank you. :-*
13th Jul 2014 4:34am
13th Jul 2014 7:48am
Thank you very much, Erotic ninja! :-*
I did not mean to cause you upset, luv. :-p I would be too distracted by myriad other things should I venture to add video to a reading.
I did not mean to cause you upset, luv. :-p I would be too distracted by myriad other things should I venture to add video to a reading.
Anonymous
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13th Jul 2014 11:55am
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13th Jul 2014 12:10pm
Didn't you once request I come rescue you from some orphanage somewhere AND didn't I warn you I'd be no mother at all to you, rather that for you it'd be the worst kind of debauchery?
Yes, yes. It was, indeed, you I said that to. You've not forgotten, have you?
I'm afraid I've had debauchery and more on my mind for you from the very beginning, luv :-*...
Yes, yes. It was, indeed, you I said that to. You've not forgotten, have you?
I'm afraid I've had debauchery and more on my mind for you from the very beginning, luv :-*...
13th Jul 2014 4:18pm
wait,one minute have to wipe the steam off my glasses... ok,wow sure is wet in here :)
13th Jul 2014 4:26pm
Are you all right, hashman, luv? :-*
I did try to make sure that sign was up in front of the door... ;-)
I did try to make sure that sign was up in front of the door... ;-)
18th Jul 2014 12:36pm
WOW! Ultra hot! This is vivid in it's description and tension ... your reading of the piece is as cool and silky as those sheets in the beginning ... And I enjoyed that you pushed boundaries in this ink as well - keeping the woman in control - the "master" - it offers a refreshing break from the misogynistic views we often see in music videos
18th Jul 2014 2:16pm
Thank you, LobodeSanPedro, luv! :-*
I am quite pleased and heartily delighted that you enjoyed this piece and my shifting the 'mastery'. This was a fun reply to make to some naughty men. ;-)
I am quite pleased and heartily delighted that you enjoyed this piece and my shifting the 'mastery'. This was a fun reply to make to some naughty men. ;-)
20th Jul 2014 10:09pm
A little sip of pain with my pleasure. It's definitely a good pairing. I need some fresh air. Enjoyed it.
21st Jul 2014 2:11am
Thank you, xmar82, luv :-*. I am glad, indeed, that you enjoyed this poem, and the pairing of the twist of pain with your pleasure.
I'll allow the fresh air, luv. :-*
I'll allow the fresh air, luv. :-*