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Women
I have no qualms
About who is in charge here yet
My pride wants to object
It raises a growl only for a minute
Then tucks its tail between my legs
My machismo wants to take me out back and
Beat me to a bloody pulp
He is more obstinate
I guess it’s my Latin blood
A fool walks a road filled with hardships and pains
His inflexibility, blindly leads him on
My eyes are open and
I have no qualms
Nor objections to post
Take my hand my love
And lead on
About who is in charge here yet
My pride wants to object
It raises a growl only for a minute
Then tucks its tail between my legs
My machismo wants to take me out back and
Beat me to a bloody pulp
He is more obstinate
I guess it’s my Latin blood
A fool walks a road filled with hardships and pains
His inflexibility, blindly leads him on
My eyes are open and
I have no qualms
Nor objections to post
Take my hand my love
And lead on
Published 7th Jul 2014
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8th Jul 2014 00:28am
8th Jul 2014 1:03am
8th Jul 2014 4:56am
Oh, X....another amazing job!!! So honored to call u a friend.
Xoxoxo
Belle
Xoxoxo
Belle
8th Jul 2014 9:15pm
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- Edited 9th Mar 2020 10:35pm
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8th Jul 2014 9:22pm
Yes I struggled a bit and I'm trying new things but I will get better. Thanks for your thoughts Matt I will take them to heart. It's good to share ideas it will only make us better writers.
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21st Jul 2014 5:59pm
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5th Aug 2014 10:42pm
Yes, bend like a reed in the wind grasshopper. If you fool yourself into thinking that you are in charge when you're in a relationship then you are a fool. Women are in charge.