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Rays of light have started to crack
your foggy veneer,
They light up the gold in my hair
that you've unpinned and let
fall upon my shoulders.
Trepidation moves your fingers gently
over my skin, finding the places
that you seek forgiveness,
It was only sadness you
had to recover my shadow from.
Salaciously we find each other
Noses touching, inhaling
the sharp breaths that escape
open wet mouths,
Pulses quicken, a welcomed applause...
Wrapped up in everything 'you'
Daylight cannot part our bodies
Nor would I be inclined...
After warmth is always the nicest,
You never lost me.
your foggy veneer,
They light up the gold in my hair
that you've unpinned and let
fall upon my shoulders.
Trepidation moves your fingers gently
over my skin, finding the places
that you seek forgiveness,
It was only sadness you
had to recover my shadow from.
Salaciously we find each other
Noses touching, inhaling
the sharp breaths that escape
open wet mouths,
Pulses quicken, a welcomed applause...
Wrapped up in everything 'you'
Daylight cannot part our bodies
Nor would I be inclined...
After warmth is always the nicest,
You never lost me.
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- Edited 27th Aug 2021 5:37pm
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8th Jul 2014 2:21am
All I can say is thank you; you've been my guide through this site and mentor. I cannot say how appreciative I am to have you xx
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- Edited 18th Jun 2018 7:37pm
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8th Jul 2014 2:22am
There's nothing more intimate than honesty... I always feel honoured when you read me xx
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9th Jul 2014 7:25am
Great opening line - capturing why two are better than one - nose touching - a close up of a moment - a true write much enjoyed
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