deepundergroundpoetry.com
inequitable
love is a chameleon
that continually changes
how it appears
so you think you are looking
at something you haven't
seen before
clever really
but then
it's actually just the same
reptilian hunter it's always been
i'm just no smarter than a bug
that continually changes
how it appears
so you think you are looking
at something you haven't
seen before
clever really
but then
it's actually just the same
reptilian hunter it's always been
i'm just no smarter than a bug
Published 6th Jul 2014
| Edited 8th Jul 2014
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 7
reading list entries 0
comments 13
reads 74
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
Anonymous
- Edited 23rd Oct 2019 7:38am
6th Jul 2014 3:55pm
<< post removed >>
7th Jul 2014 1:02am
I don't know Flower. When it comes to this topic I've got to wonder. Thank you Miss F. Always appreciated. xo
6th Jul 2014 5:52pm
7th Jul 2014 1:03am
6th Jul 2014 10:18pm
7th Jul 2014 1:03am
Guards are up brother. It won't catch me again. Appreciate you my friend. :)
7th Jul 2014 1:28am
this is perfect! I like your closing line; but more so the chameleon reference. Couldn't have said it better xx
8th Jul 2014 2:24am
Once again your kind words are appreciated Miss Heart. Glad you enjoyed. Thank you. xo
Anonymous
- Edited 15th Apr 2019 9:40pm
7th Jul 2014 4:49pm
<< post removed >>
8th Jul 2014 2:27am
Sting she did Miss Crim. And sting she would again. Always a chair in my home my dear. Thank you. Power and love to you. xo
7th Jul 2014 10:50pm
That's a smart and heartfeltpoem, Twitch.
Love the reptilian imagery, it's so
appropriate!
Love changes,
it's fickle,
and fickle-colored.
An often so beautiful in it's brilliancy.
And often so cruel.
Love the reptilian imagery, it's so
appropriate!
Love changes,
it's fickle,
and fickle-colored.
An often so beautiful in it's brilliancy.
And often so cruel.
8th Jul 2014 1:48am
It so does miss Chi. A shapeshifter indeed. Thank you as always for your lovely words Miss Chi. You mean much. xo
17th Jul 2014 11:03pm
Love is tricky. It can take you past the sun one minute and then slam you into hell the next. You captured the conundrum nicely. Enjoyed.
