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the Pain
The bleeding won't stop,
I cut too deep,
My arm is numb,
I'm falling asleep.
The pain is great,
I still can't believe,
When i needed you most,
You decided to leave.
My face is wet,
Why am i crying?!
You're making him laugh,
While i'm here dying.
But before I leave,
I just have to say,
I love you so much,
You'll see you do too....
........one day.........
I cut too deep,
My arm is numb,
I'm falling asleep.
The pain is great,
I still can't believe,
When i needed you most,
You decided to leave.
My face is wet,
Why am i crying?!
You're making him laugh,
While i'm here dying.
But before I leave,
I just have to say,
I love you so much,
You'll see you do too....
........one day.........
Published 1st Apr 2011
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1st Apr 2011 7:06pm
1st Apr 2011 7:10pm
Sweet! i'm glad to have a fellow friend of likemindedness. Btw tottaly random but you should listen to Strawberry gashes by jack off jill. She's my inspiration
2nd Apr 2011 2:49pm
love the poem. i just got an account here. my favorite poems usually are about cutting or death from cutting
8th Apr 2011 5:07pm
you subscribed to me,
so it was only fair to investigate,
and i am so glad i did.
i love this poem..<3
the only part i wonder about is, i relate with all but the last two lines.
but now im leaping into a story,
a very nice, well written poem.(:
so it was only fair to investigate,
and i am so glad i did.
i love this poem..<3
the only part i wonder about is, i relate with all but the last two lines.
but now im leaping into a story,
a very nice, well written poem.(:
8th Apr 2011 8:25pm
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25th Apr 2011 6:03pm
hahaha it was before we started dating babe, dont worry i only loves you <3 well and nathan but you get the point