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World Peace
She was; on the beach,
on Molly, on him.
She teased
that he looked like
a Greek Deity/ Rolling Stone
hybrid.
He believed
in her sweetness
in such a way
that he wondered
if she wasn't the answer
to world peace.
She looked up from
his thigh, her pillow,
enchantedly saying,
"If we ever fall in love,
I hope it feels precisely
like this."
He smiles at her notion
and she smiles at his smile.
Somewhere, The Gods,
they smile at the both of them.
on Molly, on him.
She teased
that he looked like
a Greek Deity/ Rolling Stone
hybrid.
He believed
in her sweetness
in such a way
that he wondered
if she wasn't the answer
to world peace.
She looked up from
his thigh, her pillow,
enchantedly saying,
"If we ever fall in love,
I hope it feels precisely
like this."
He smiles at her notion
and she smiles at his smile.
Somewhere, The Gods,
they smile at the both of them.
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- Edited 15th May 2018 00:13am
2nd Jul 2014 6:06pm
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Re: World Peace
2nd Jul 2014 6:07pm
Re: World Peace
2nd Jul 2014 6:42pm
'precisely like this': that might be the whole world's wish. you write these tender scenes really well...
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Re: World Peace
2nd Jul 2014 6:51pm
Anonymous
- Edited 27th Aug 2021 5:37pm
2nd Jul 2014 6:52pm
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2nd Jul 2014 6:56pm
Thank You Poet. I really do feel that I write scenes out of my life and I'm always flattered when people enjoy my imagery. xo
Re: World Peace
2nd Jul 2014 10:29pm
"She was; on the beach,
on Molly, on him.
She teased
that he looked like
a Greek Deity/ Rolling Stone
hybrid."--Thats great
I like this one, a lot.
Peace in ecstasy..
Awesome.
on Molly, on him.
She teased
that he looked like
a Greek Deity/ Rolling Stone
hybrid."--Thats great
I like this one, a lot.
Peace in ecstasy..
Awesome.
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Re: World Peace
2nd Jul 2014 10:32pm
Anonymous
- Edited 21st May 2018 7:36pm
3rd Jul 2014 7:07am
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4th Jul 2014 9:38pm
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- Edited 17th May 2018 1:37pm
8th Jul 2014 4:22am
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