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Love
Four walls hold me captive inside and leave me wondering when will I be free to love?.
Love, leaves a bitter & sweet taste in your mouth from time to time.
Who I am, is a person who wants to love and learn how to love.
All you need is love, be it, learn how to share it and rejoice the truth of it. Take the world in your own hands and grasp it with care. It's good to be fair to yourself and others.
Love is all you need.
Love, leaves a bitter & sweet taste in your mouth from time to time.
Who I am, is a person who wants to love and learn how to love.
All you need is love, be it, learn how to share it and rejoice the truth of it. Take the world in your own hands and grasp it with care. It's good to be fair to yourself and others.
Love is all you need.
Published 2nd Jul 2014
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Anonymous
2nd Jul 2014 8:04pm
"Who I am, is a person who wants to love and learn how to love"<-- I like this, it suggest that you're not oppose to opening up and learning how to show and give love.
That last line though, I do believe love is the foundation that can change, create, correct and solve most things for the betterment, but in this world, you definitely need more than love... Xo
That last line though, I do believe love is the foundation that can change, create, correct and solve most things for the betterment, but in this world, you definitely need more than love... Xo
2nd Jul 2014 9:02pm
Well I love love and I think the reason why I used " love is all you need" for the last line is to reach out to the lonely, hurting people that feel nothing, but pain though of course I don't believe love is ALL you need
But thanks for your feedback :)
But thanks for your feedback :)
Anonymous
2nd Jul 2014 8:37pm
Very concise and true. Observation: reshape the paragraphs so that they are easier to read : )
4th Jul 2014 5:09pm
4th Jul 2014 8:02pm
Thank you so much for that! I actually had a bit of inspiration from the Beatles. :)
4th Jul 2014 8:14pm
30th Aug 2014 10:04pm
Ah, MsRockyJackson, luv :-*
This poem is truly wonderful. I DO happen to believe love is the foundation for all things and love is all that is necessary for things to function, luv. :-* But, I also happen to believe in a much, much broader definition of love than most people.
I believe love encompasses absolutely everything. Love is far more powerful and transcendent than people realize and real love is not just about romance or the ephemeral...
Enough. I could go on quite too long on this. Suffice it to say that your poem is an excellent tribute, quite magnificent, luv. :-*
This poem is truly wonderful. I DO happen to believe love is the foundation for all things and love is all that is necessary for things to function, luv. :-* But, I also happen to believe in a much, much broader definition of love than most people.
I believe love encompasses absolutely everything. Love is far more powerful and transcendent than people realize and real love is not just about romance or the ephemeral...
Enough. I could go on quite too long on this. Suffice it to say that your poem is an excellent tribute, quite magnificent, luv. :-*
