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Caries
Many of my poems
sound bitter.
Sweet ones would only
cause caries.
sound bitter.
Sweet ones would only
cause caries.
Written by
Chiyo
(Miss Chi)
Published 26th Jun 2014
| Edited 27th Jun 2014
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Re: Caries
26th Jun 2014 11:56pm
re: Re: Caries
27th Jun 2014 00:10am
Perhaps
I will.
Your comments are sweeter than my poems and I'm happy about that!
I will.
Your comments are sweeter than my poems and I'm happy about that!
Re: Caries
27th Jun 2014 00:24am
I have a good dental plan and I will risk it. Write on Miss Chi, the sweeter the better.
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re: Re: Caries
27th Jun 2014 1:54pm
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re: Re: Caries
27th Jun 2014 1:52pm
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27th Jun 2014 1:21am
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re: Re: Caries
LEAVE? I will not leave
as long as I've
something to say.
So, please stay!
I'd go if you went.
xx
as long as I've
something to say.
So, please stay!
I'd go if you went.
xx
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Re: Caries
27th Jun 2014 2:07am
... just write it Miss Chi, bitter or sweet - it all reflects a moment we want to share ... With that said - Thank you for this and everything else you've written ... Looking forward to more
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re: Re: Caries
27th Jun 2014 2:00pm
You are too kind, LSP! I'm truly moved and grateful to count you among my dear fellow poets which I much adore! Thank you!
Re: Caries
27th Jun 2014 3:03am
sugar-free is the way to go, Chi. but you are still the sweetheart of the underground!...
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re: Re: Caries
27th Jun 2014 2:04pm
How sweet of you :-)! "The sweetheart of the underground", that sounds particularly nice! Thank you so much for you kind and encouraging support, always!
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27th Jun 2014 2:13pm
Re: Caries
27th Jun 2014 2:15pm
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27th Jun 2014 3:12pm
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re: Re: Caries
27th Jun 2014 5:17pm