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26th Jun 2014 8:02am
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Re: Sometimes
26th Jun 2014 00:52am
there goes one of your trains
of thought, short tracked to
perfection..:)
beautifully expressed...
of thought, short tracked to
perfection..:)
beautifully expressed...
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re: Re: Sometimes
26th Jun 2014 8:06am
Coming from you, the master of the shorties, I'm all the more thrilled about your lovely comment.
After half a bottle of prosecco and a large helping of self-pity it came to my mind as it is :-).
After half a bottle of prosecco and a large helping of self-pity it came to my mind as it is :-).
Re: Sometimes
26th Jun 2014 1:55am
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Hope my hurt doesn't catch anyone :-). Thank you so much for your kindness, poet John.
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26th Jun 2014 2:54am
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26th Jun 2014 8:10am
Re: Sometimes
26th Jun 2014 5:44pm
re: Re: Sometimes
26th Jun 2014 9:44pm
I knew it would stríke a chord with you, dear JeJe. You know much about those feelings and sure can relate to it. I do hope you're past the tears!xoxo
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27th Jun 2014 3:32pm
A quote came to mind….
"I find you in these tears, few, useless and here at last.
Don't come back."
Philip Levine
I hope you are beyond the tears too!!! ox
JeJe
"I find you in these tears, few, useless and here at last.
Don't come back."
Philip Levine
I hope you are beyond the tears too!!! ox
JeJe
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27th Jun 2014 5:14pm
That's a wonderful and so fitting quote, JeJe! Thank you for sharing it! Sometimes, when I bask in self-pity, tears will come though drying fast.
xoxo, my dear! I hope you're good!
xoxo, my dear! I hope you're good!
Re: Sometimes
26th Jun 2014 8:45pm
A sad write about losing in love. The pain does eventually fade though remnants are always left behind. Good write.
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All the remnants of love and pain account for our lives. They make our memories rich and our entity whole although the moments of hurt are piercing. I wouldn't want to miss a single experience. Thank you for your lovely words, xmar82, and for your interest and time.
Re: Sometimes
2nd Jul 2014 5:55am
Relatable, I'm sure many people have felt this way. I hope things get easier for you :)
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