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am I
am I but flesh and bone
do I have a purpose
in this fucked up world
carrying my carcass
over the earth for what
am I not seen or heard
like the living dead
shall I feed off the weak
and continue to suffer inside
do I have a purpose
in this fucked up world
carrying my carcass
over the earth for what
am I not seen or heard
like the living dead
shall I feed off the weak
and continue to suffer inside
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25th Jun 2014 1:57pm
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25th Jun 2014 2:48pm
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25th Jun 2014 3:38pm
I'm speechless Poet! Many would think that wasn't possible.
Fuck 'em!!! Lmfao...Your words mean so much. Thank you.
Fuck 'em!!! Lmfao...Your words mean so much. Thank you.
Re: am I
25th Jun 2014 7:28pm
so much depression in your poem, Tommie. you have many purposes. we in the underground need you to feed our addiction to your unique poetry...
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26th Jun 2014 3:54am
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25th Jun 2014 10:20pm
There is no doubt in my mind that you have a purpose...it seems to me that you are a loving mother, stellar lover and a compassionate and fun friend...and damn what a carcass :)
Well written, Tommie!
Well written, Tommie!
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26th Jun 2014 3:55am
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26th Jun 2014 3:56am
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I'd really enjoy hearing your definition.
I'm a huge fan of individuality...most people I know and try to stay away from are those that never "own up to their own shit"...fake, living in a fantasy...honesty would kill them. I verbally blow people's hair back with my blunt, bold, no fucking around mouth. Turns out, they don't really want to hear the truth. Tough shit!
I choose to live life...we only get one. Festering isn't something I do, they're too many of those people doing that already. And I'm too much fun to be unhappy!
I truly appreciate you taking the time to read me and commenting. Thank you Jack Tex ; )
I'm a huge fan of individuality...most people I know and try to stay away from are those that never "own up to their own shit"...fake, living in a fantasy...honesty would kill them. I verbally blow people's hair back with my blunt, bold, no fucking around mouth. Turns out, they don't really want to hear the truth. Tough shit!
I choose to live life...we only get one. Festering isn't something I do, they're too many of those people doing that already. And I'm too much fun to be unhappy!
I truly appreciate you taking the time to read me and commenting. Thank you Jack Tex ; )
Re: am I
26th Jun 2014 8:41pm
I really enjoyed this dark write. You surprise me everytime you put pen to paper. Don't ever stop.
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26th Jun 2014 11:23pm