Well, what the fuck?

Yes a spiritual awakening made me think what the fuck... I am only human.

I do indeed. And thank you :)

I believe you can write better than this. If so please post it. If you want vent your anger there is no need to vent it here. People want to read poetry. Your post is offensive to me but i'm old fashioned. Would you give this poem to your father or mother to read? I doubt it. Please do better. Regards.    

You did not have to read it. And last time I checked there was a place for anger poems, posts. It was your choice to read it. Next time, look away...and while you are looking away look in the mirror and think next time you  are about to judge someone. Critiquing is fine, however your tone here was offensive.

Lol, Super Trooper is an a$$... what bible of poetry states that you are not allowed to vent anger in poetry. You'd think you wrote it for him the way he took offence. Oh well, if he has some appropriate critique, write it. So it's not the best bunch of words you ever put together, but who has ever been able to write their best work time after time? It's not even mathematically possible to keep that up. Personally I am just happy you didn't write it for me, or did you, lolololololol!

You are safe, JJ!  :)

Smiling is what I'm doing when I read your poem. A hint of anger and humor. Just the right amount. Enjoyed.

Thanks xmar82. I have some issues sometimes. Dont we all...lol:)