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In tune
High above the clouds
You're the wind under my wings
The shine in my eyes
Flight in unison
Simultaneous moving wings
Careful not to clash
Gliding graciously
Carried by the thermal lift
Heartbeats all in tune
Had a busy time
A lot of work to be done
Leisure time in sight
You're the wind under my wings
The shine in my eyes
Flight in unison
Simultaneous moving wings
Careful not to clash
Gliding graciously
Carried by the thermal lift
Heartbeats all in tune
Had a busy time
A lot of work to be done
Leisure time in sight
Published 23rd Jun 2014
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23rd Jun 2014 7:42pm
23rd Jun 2014 7:45pm
Sir Lancelott, I always appreciate your sweet comments! Hope you have something to read for me, too :-)!
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- Edited 15th May 2018 9:39pm
23rd Jun 2014 9:39pm
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23rd Jun 2014 9:47pm
I'm so glad about your words, dear Fay! I missed your poems, too, and am thrilled about your latest! Thanks for reading me and leaving your thoughtful comments!
23rd Jun 2014 9:41pm
your poem has an angelic feel to it, Chi, the gentle loving flight.
don't get too close to the sun!...
don't get too close to the sun!...
23rd Jun 2014 9:51pm
Lovely words, John, thank you so much, they make me happy :-).
A little warmth is nice but you shouldn't grow too close to someone who'd otherwise consume you by his fire.
A little warmth is nice but you shouldn't grow too close to someone who'd otherwise consume you by his fire.
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- Edited 14th May 2018 10:07pm
23rd Jun 2014 9:53pm
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23rd Jun 2014 10:03pm
And the wind under your wings, too? Makes me glad, Gabriel!
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By the way, how do you like the emoticons digged up especially for you?
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By the way, how do you like the emoticons digged up especially for you?
23rd Jun 2014 10:55pm
Ah,Miss Chi...The Who sings "there's a symphony that i hear in your heart sets my head a-reeling" and i totally agree with them (peace) :)
23rd Jun 2014 11:00pm
To be in sync with someone else provides for the best of harmonies ever. Discordant notes included :-).
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23rd Jun 2014 11:21pm
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23rd Jun 2014 11:25pm
Likewise, Sir Speak, you know that I love your work! Thanks for your encouriging words!
xx
xx
23rd Jun 2014 11:42pm
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24th Jun 2014 4:42pm
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24th Jun 2014 8:24pm
What a poetic response to my senryus :-). Thanks a lot for stopping by and reading me! Appreciate that!
25th Jun 2014 5:30pm
With love and patience, you can conquer anything.
Beautiful and peaceful
Beautiful and peaceful
25th Jun 2014 10:33pm
A contradiction in itself but somehow fitting :-). It is beautiful to know someone for such a long time (39 years), still love him and still be able to get along with him. A peaceful though not at all boring life :-). Thanks, dear Lena!
2nd Jul 2014 00:27am
