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Stranger
A stranger in my own skin
Finger tips tip-toe across the lines that crease my face and shape my mood
Staring into the mirror that echos back this nothingness
Aching to push away the vessel that keeps me bound
I step out of myself and into everything
I shake off my long-held depravity
I am new
Finger tips tip-toe across the lines that crease my face and shape my mood
Staring into the mirror that echos back this nothingness
Aching to push away the vessel that keeps me bound
I step out of myself and into everything
I shake off my long-held depravity
I am new
Published 23rd Jun 2014
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23rd Jun 2014 11:00am
23rd Jun 2014 3:36pm
23rd Jun 2014 12:41pm
23rd Jun 2014 3:37pm
24th Jun 2014 3:47am
This is really deep! Nicely written in a short and concise manner...I can also relate, though i still don't feel new... Thanks for sharing
24th Jun 2014 5:02am
Me neither :). The last part was more of what I long for rather my current reality. Thank you for the feedback.
24th Jun 2014 11:38am
I was going to say that it didn't really feel all that honest there towards the end. But I see you feel the same.
I love where it was going. Hope you will feel new soon.
I love where it was going. Hope you will feel new soon.
24th Jun 2014 3:16pm
As I stated before, the last part wasn't where I currently am but where I hope to be. Thank you for your feedback.
29th Jun 2014 3:29am
29th Jun 2014 3:43am
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21st Jul 2014 12:27pm
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21st Jul 2014 2:36pm
5th Sep 2014 5:22am
Hm. Wanting to feel new... a desire with which I was well acquainted. But the actualization of this desire? This is something I write about often.
