they stole our shit

Love it, love it, love it :)

Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! ... For time in reading and commenting - and adding this to your Reading List

very modern & star-crossed fugitives. dramatic atmosphere...

... My Bonnie & Clyde film de noir ... the getaways are dangerous

Thanks for the read and comment as always

..kinda dark, yet intriguing...

Enjoyed Pedro! Xo

I was trying to convey a sense of urgency and darkness ... Glad you could feel it  
 
xoxo Lady Rain

These few lines invite further investigation ...

An investigation might lead to a confession which means her & I will need to be in witness protection ...

Thanks for the read and comment

MO Chara,

Such an intricate weave of tension within this piece!

For me, this poem plays out like viewing a scene from a movie...like watching a pair of  'theives-for-hire'---that whole senario of those who are pros at pilfering by night....lovers by day...and always fleeing for their very lives!

( or something like that... ;) (gol) Seriously--though--

I was truly caught up, in the

Intensity of your Ink! xo
 

She is - a rún mo chroí - and I wanted to convey a sense of mystery and daring in what we do ... bold yet stealth ... controlled chaos skirting felonies lol ...  
 
I'm glad you picked up on and enjoyed the intensity ...  
 
Go raibh maith agat DarkEnchantress

LOL! I have to say, the line where you say..."the retreat of your skirt dares me to commit larceny in plain view" ....is outstanding and provacative

Peligroso!

It's funny how her skirt always runs for cover when things are getting hot ... One less witness

Gracias

Dark, intriguing with a grain of smile. Faszinating, your style.

Yes, you're right ...smile in the darkness

Thanks for the read  & list add

"The retreat of your skirt" takes us to a true place - I know u were there doing it for all of us
Brilliantly stark Big Dog

I'm glad you liked the write whale ... Hopefully it sparks others in their own adventures

Salud

wow
kinda dark but very thought provoking
enjoyed

As they say: the darker ... the sweeter the juice lol

Thanks for the read

Naughty and dangerous! Lip biting pain and lust permeating the air. Good stuff. Enjoyed.

I'm glad you picked up on the tension in this.  Usually the tension is etched on the faces of those around her and I in a bar or cafe - they watch and wait to see how outrageous we can get lol ...

Thanks for the read !