Ethereal Fortunes

concise and intricate at the same time... good luck in your comp... break a pen

Thanks, JC, for the list add. "Break a pen" — wonderful!

Nice tribute write :)
the second part is killer
good luck in the comp

PS
Great title!

Hey, Nikki, if you're here, it must have just hint of dark, which is what I wanted.

:)

The title is another nod to Soul, who brings a positive energy to DU!

Thanks.

.....so filled with kaleidoscopic colors.  An excellent read.  Good luck in this competition : )

Why, thank you, Mr M, I'm pleased you think so.

My Friend,

Your soothing, vivid imagery draws me deep--inescapable--into this nocturne scene of tranquility...

A tribute--not only to Souladareatease--but to all, for whom the magic, and the serenity of the darkness, beckons.

Peacefulness on Parchment!

Enchantress, you amaze me with your ability to get at the heart of my poems.

Yes, exactly! For those of us who know the gentle side of night, this is a visit to a place of calmness.

This is a good poem....a natural & serene moment.  Great.

Cheers, Mike, for digging the serenity!

Yes!.. Always expanding.

Never surprised by your ability; just your knack for nailing perfection with your heart, poetess.
Very nice tribute to Soul! I am sure he's appreciative of your poem. To the list!

Too kind, my dear Jake, many thanks for your words on this, and the list add.

Looks like you were right...

You Are Greatness with that Wicked Pen Dear Atakti-Thank You for this Exquisite Ink-Appreciative and humbled!!!

There he is! I'm pleased you like it, Soul. I tried to capture the energy you bring to DU. Thank you very much for the generous comments.

When we wait we capture the sun wake - captured here Atakti like quicksilver in slomo

Thank you kindly, whale, for the slo-mo quicksilver... awesome.

A very nice piece here Atakti...I agree with  nikkimoe- that is a great title!!!!

Many thanks for stopping by, mischief.

:)

This is beautiful.

Thank you kindly, Celine Belli!

A truly beautiful, deeply transcendent piece Atakti, in which it seems, sounds & feels as if you yourself have somehow through attentive, open reflection, attunement & deeper, receptive 'listening' to the ripened, boundless voice of your innermost muse, have mysteriously & quietly slipped just under the outer skin of our everyday, usual, more limited human, sensory perceptions & here in the gentle, peaceful blooming & silently breaking dawn-like light of this lovely, serene, simple poem's delicate vision, you have tenderly dipped into the resonant vibrational frequency of & managed to wonderfully capture a rare, fleeting, jewel-like glimpse & intimate impression of something truly sublime, which even after re-reading several times (to better absorb & savor!), still lingers on my senses & vicariously in my thoughts, like a slowly fading dream, in which I can literally feel the warm, inner glow of it's blissful, timeless peace!...  (After a really long, trying day today, this brought me quickly (& quite unexpectedly!) to just the right, perfect place & soothing, head-space, my overall 'being'(body, mind & spirit)really needed to be at tonight!!! ("thanks!")...  Good medicine for sure & a really great write!...

- OIN