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"In Just A few Seconds" ... A Poem written by Big Virge 28/10/2007
If you had a few seconds ...
What would you be ... " Expressing " ... ???
Your views about ... " Chicks " .....
and their ... " Sexy lil' bits " ... !?!?!
Or ... about being rich ...
and the things that brings ... ?
Well me ... I'd Prefer ...
to ... talk about ... The World ...
and worms that ... " Turn " ...
and YES ... Girls Toooo ... !!!!!!!
but ... Without being rude ...
I'd speak about ... views ...
I feel are ... TRUE ... !!! ...
and would ... try to school ...
our ... " Wayward Youth " ... !!!!!
Like those who ... " Choose " ...
to ... Pick Up ... " Tools " ...
for .... " Violent Moves " .....
cos that's ... NOT COOL ... !!!!!
"YO, Put the tools DOWN !
before you're found,
in living rooms, on the
Six 'O' Clock News !"
Pick Up ... A PEN ... !!!
and ... " Use Your Head " ... !!!
to help .... " Uplift " ....
through ... TRUE LYRICS ... !!!!!
Try ... " Investing " ...
Your time in ... " EXPRESSING " ...
Your Views ... about life ...
and all it's ... " Lessons " ...
and you might find ...
Yourself ... SURPRISED ... !!!!!
by ... what you write ...
In ...................
" Just a few seconds !!! " ........
What would you be ... " Expressing " ... ???
Your views about ... " Chicks " .....
and their ... " Sexy lil' bits " ... !?!?!
Or ... about being rich ...
and the things that brings ... ?
Well me ... I'd Prefer ...
to ... talk about ... The World ...
and worms that ... " Turn " ...
and YES ... Girls Toooo ... !!!!!!!
but ... Without being rude ...
I'd speak about ... views ...
I feel are ... TRUE ... !!! ...
and would ... try to school ...
our ... " Wayward Youth " ... !!!!!
Like those who ... " Choose " ...
to ... Pick Up ... " Tools " ...
for .... " Violent Moves " .....
cos that's ... NOT COOL ... !!!!!
"YO, Put the tools DOWN !
before you're found,
in living rooms, on the
Six 'O' Clock News !"
Pick Up ... A PEN ... !!!
and ... " Use Your Head " ... !!!
to help .... " Uplift " ....
through ... TRUE LYRICS ... !!!!!
Try ... " Investing " ...
Your time in ... " EXPRESSING " ...
Your Views ... about life ...
and all it's ... " Lessons " ...
and you might find ...
Yourself ... SURPRISED ... !!!!!
by ... what you write ...
In ...................
" Just a few seconds !!! " ........
Published 21st Jun 2014
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i like the positive message here virge....
everybody is always tryin to be so hard that if it's not negative it does'nt get any play and everybody forgets that words and music can change the world....
i fall victim to that same hate trap myself and i hate it so i perpetuate the cycle...
"the best any man can do this side of the grave is know that he is bad"
i forget where that quote came from and i used to really like it.
now i think it's just a cop out.
keep fightin the good fight bro.....
everybody is always tryin to be so hard that if it's not negative it does'nt get any play and everybody forgets that words and music can change the world....
i fall victim to that same hate trap myself and i hate it so i perpetuate the cycle...
"the best any man can do this side of the grave is know that he is bad"
i forget where that quote came from and i used to really like it.
now i think it's just a cop out.
keep fightin the good fight bro.....
Cheers JR .... !!!
You know though, that I have been labelled as one of the ... " Mr. Negatives " ... in this game of expression.
Well, ying and yang demands balance ...
I agree, too many are trying TOO Hard to be HARD ... ?!?
but, there are also those who like to present themselves as being ... Ultra Positive, or, as per your quote, those who actually revel in negativity,
As I always say, TRUTH is TRUTH ....
Can't all be good ....
Can't all be bad ...
But they have equal place in the things I write, but, out of the dark must come light ..... !!!
Appreciate you commenting ... I ain't about to stop fighting just yet ....
Stay Good ....
Virge
You know though, that I have been labelled as one of the ... " Mr. Negatives " ... in this game of expression.
Well, ying and yang demands balance ...
I agree, too many are trying TOO Hard to be HARD ... ?!?
but, there are also those who like to present themselves as being ... Ultra Positive, or, as per your quote, those who actually revel in negativity,
As I always say, TRUTH is TRUTH ....
Can't all be good ....
Can't all be bad ...
But they have equal place in the things I write, but, out of the dark must come light ..... !!!
Appreciate you commenting ... I ain't about to stop fighting just yet ....
Stay Good ....
Virge
23rd Jun 2014 1:49pm
Enjoyed your presentation of self ying and yang!...I can sense the attaining balance to be had!
23rd Jun 2014 5:09pm