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Dear Daddy
Dear Daddy,You Never Understood That I Couldn't Always Be Your Perfect Little Angel.I Had Bad Grades And Lied All The Time.You Never Understood Why I Was in So Much Pain...You Never Realized That You Were The One Hurting me...I Can't Always Be That Perfect Little Girl When I Was Eight....Because I'm Not There Anymore...You May See A Happy Girl On The Outside...But On The Inside I'm Hollow And Broken.You Will NEVER Understand Why I'm In So Much Pain....And Now I'm Dead
Published 20th Jun 2014
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20th Jun 2014 6:46pm
9th Jul 2014 3:17am
How can those who do not see
All around them feelings of grief
Very tightly bound in chains
Eternal rage for every change
All around are feelings of death
Time for them to know or lie
Rules of society to abide by
Unless those that cannot hear
Love to be close and near
Yell and scream until the last sigh
How could any of them understand
Anything that your mind has become
People with their faces and smiles
Pressing the nerve and turning the dials
Yellowed skin and broken mystic
Don't begin to describe the burning tomes
All around the funeral home
Yesterday has gone with good-bye
Someones friend another statistic
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I felt like I had to respond in poem form. :D
Enjoy to the fullest. Your poem was such a lovely read~
All around them feelings of grief
Very tightly bound in chains
Eternal rage for every change
All around are feelings of death
Time for them to know or lie
Rules of society to abide by
Unless those that cannot hear
Love to be close and near
Yell and scream until the last sigh
How could any of them understand
Anything that your mind has become
People with their faces and smiles
Pressing the nerve and turning the dials
Yellowed skin and broken mystic
Don't begin to describe the burning tomes
All around the funeral home
Yesterday has gone with good-bye
Someones friend another statistic
~~
I felt like I had to respond in poem form. :D
Enjoy to the fullest. Your poem was such a lovely read~
Anonymous
- Edited 16th May 2018 3:35pm
14th Jul 2014 11:03pm
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14th Jul 2014 11:37pm
19th Jul 2014 4:51am
Mothers shouldn't do such a thing. I'm glad you get dodge the volume at least on one side of the parental team!