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Invisible
Invisible
No One Sees Through My Fake Smiles,
No Ones Sees That I Cry Every Night,
Tempted To Give Up My Life,
Invisible..
Your Not Here Anymore....
And Now I'm Locked Behind A Door..Clutching The Blade,
Invisible...
I'm Practically Better Of Dead,
Invisible..
You Don't Understand! And You Never Will,
Invisible..
No One Sees That I'm Dying,
Tempted To Grab The Knife And End My Life...
Invisible
It's Not Like I Mean Anything To The World Anyway..For Gods Sake I'm Invisible
No One Sees Through My Fake Smiles,
No Ones Sees That I Cry Every Night,
Tempted To Give Up My Life,
Invisible..
Your Not Here Anymore....
And Now I'm Locked Behind A Door..Clutching The Blade,
Invisible...
I'm Practically Better Of Dead,
Invisible..
You Don't Understand! And You Never Will,
Invisible..
No One Sees That I'm Dying,
Tempted To Grab The Knife And End My Life...
Invisible
It's Not Like I Mean Anything To The World Anyway..For Gods Sake I'm Invisible
Written by
Fallen_Angel_194
(Imperfect)
Published 13th Jun 2014
| Edited 16th Jun 2014
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Re: Invisable
13th Jun 2014 9:21pm
Re: Invisable
13th Jun 2014 9:27pm
re: Re: Invisable
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13th Jun 2014 11:51pm
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re: Re: Invisable
13th Jun 2014 11:55pm
Re: Invisable
14th Jun 2014 3:20pm
Re: Invisable
15th Jun 2014 3:43am
My little chickadee , you're not really invisible because you misspelled the word 8 times including the title. That makes you very visible. Ha! Just thought I'd put a little humor here.
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re: Re: Invisable
15th Jun 2014 3:46am
Re: Invisible
Ah, my little chickadee, now you look so beautiful since you fixed your dress! Everything looks perfect. And so quickly! Here, please take these dozen yellow roses, but first release your hand from that blade. Permit me, please, a kiss of that hand?
Ooops! In my excitement I didn't notice the lower hem still needs to be fixed (the last word in the last line).
Ooops! In my excitement I didn't notice the lower hem still needs to be fixed (the last word in the last line).
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re: Re: Invisible
16th Jun 2014 3:00am
:)
I'm Trying To Make Myself Let Go Of The Blade...
Thank You Candycrier,You Made My Day :)
I'm Trying To Make Myself Let Go Of The Blade...
Thank You Candycrier,You Made My Day :)
Re: Invisible
20th Jun 2014 6:25am
Re: Invisible
26th Jun 2014 2:36am