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Castle Motherfucking Awesome
I tell the world her magic little universe disgusts me
I mean...pretty trolls on holy unicorns...it's fucking absurd,
living in a perfect snow globe where the snow isn't even snow
it's just ice cream and cake,
in her land everything works out for the best
and it makes me want to punch holes in every fucking wall I see,
It pisses me off and it makes me insanely angry
because in the deepest part of my heart I would love to live
there....
even if it is just a fantasy.
I mean...pretty trolls on holy unicorns...it's fucking absurd,
living in a perfect snow globe where the snow isn't even snow
it's just ice cream and cake,
in her land everything works out for the best
and it makes me want to punch holes in every fucking wall I see,
It pisses me off and it makes me insanely angry
because in the deepest part of my heart I would love to live
there....
even if it is just a fantasy.
Published 13th Jun 2014
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13th Jun 2014 6:52am
I really like the style of your writing. This is a great write with huge character in few words, which is my favorite combo.
Enjoyed...
Enjoyed...
13th Jun 2014 3:19pm
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13th Jun 2014 3:19pm
14th Jun 2014 1:53am
Touching truth O Wise One!!!
This was formed fantastic Nikki-Looks and feels like a diary entry-but reads rolling and pure!!!
This was formed fantastic Nikki-Looks and feels like a diary entry-but reads rolling and pure!!!
14th Jun 2014 3:59am
27th Jun 2014 5:04pm
Your titles always rock and punching holes in every fucking wall just takes the fucking ice cream and cake.
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