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Sweet Love, Invisible
Sweet love invisible...
I see her around
every corner I turn
that marvel of womanly mystique
I, for so long have yearned...
Where does she go when
those days, grey to night?
what might her heart seek
if I were anywhere in sight?
Oh lord, I gasp at the physical
power of her SOUL perfection
she possesses... I profess
I'm on the verge of 'sole reflection...'
Can one not...
wistfully wish from afar?
as I sit in plunder
I wonder how, who,
and where you are
Casting prayers up
towards pillowed sky
Please, sweet precious
dear angel I cry...
Don't leave me feeling like
all the rest, INVISIBLE
the next time you pass me by...
I see her around
every corner I turn
that marvel of womanly mystique
I, for so long have yearned...
Where does she go when
those days, grey to night?
what might her heart seek
if I were anywhere in sight?
Oh lord, I gasp at the physical
power of her SOUL perfection
she possesses... I profess
I'm on the verge of 'sole reflection...'
Can one not...
wistfully wish from afar?
as I sit in plunder
I wonder how, who,
and where you are
Casting prayers up
towards pillowed sky
Please, sweet precious
dear angel I cry...
Don't leave me feeling like
all the rest, INVISIBLE
the next time you pass me by...
Published 12th Jun 2014
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Anonymous
- Edited 27th Aug 2021 5:37pm
12th Jun 2014 1:26am
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12th Jun 2014 5:16am
Thanks bro. I appreciate you always n forever :)
As for "going to get her"
alas I can't, becuz it was meant to be
about that ONE I've yet to find lol
As for "going to get her"
alas I can't, becuz it was meant to be
about that ONE I've yet to find lol
Anonymous
- Edited 28th Nov 2018 00:39am
12th Jun 2014 1:31am
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12th Jun 2014 5:16am
12th Jun 2014 5:18am
Thank you Broomie
I'm happy you liked n I'm honored
by your continued support :)
I'm happy you liked n I'm honored
by your continued support :)
Anonymous
- Edited 26th Jun 2018 9:39pm
12th Jun 2014 3:10am
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12th Jun 2014 5:20am
Actually you're not far off at all, in fact it's much closer
to what I was feeling/thinking when I penned it :)
Thank u my dear, appreciate your support :)
to what I was feeling/thinking when I penned it :)
Thank u my dear, appreciate your support :)
Anonymous
- Edited 15th May 2018 9:39pm
12th Jun 2014 10:47am
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12th Jun 2014 12:06pm
12th Jun 2014 4:58pm
12th Jun 2014 11:56pm
Sweet grace, thank you so much :)
I'm smiling big now lol... Appreciate u much :)
I'm smiling big now lol... Appreciate u much :)
Anonymous
12th Jun 2014 5:44pm
Don't leave me feeling like
all the rest, INVISIBLE
the next time you pass me by..."<--I wouldn't dare make you feel like that boo! :)
This was simple lovely in it's design, Poe! Xo
all the rest, INVISIBLE
the next time you pass me by..."<--I wouldn't dare make you feel like that boo! :)
This was simple lovely in it's design, Poe! Xo
12th Jun 2014 11:57pm
Aaaaawwww c'mere u angel! Mmmmmmuuuaaahhh!!
Ur the best my dear Rain :) thank you! :)
Ur the best my dear Rain :) thank you! :)
Anonymous
- Edited 15th May 2018 3:36pm
12th Jun 2014 10:17pm
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12th Jun 2014 11:59pm
13th Jun 2014 1:55pm
Invisible? You? Never! At least not to me but I'm surely not the "angel" you're seeking for. She will notice you, "origamying" her wings and finally come to rest on your heart and soul. XO
13th Jun 2014 11:12pm
Sweet of you of to say my dear, sadly it is like that for me
N no I don't need a true blue 'angel' just an angel in MY eyes
She can naughty n all lol... Thank u always for the support :)
N no I don't need a true blue 'angel' just an angel in MY eyes
She can naughty n all lol... Thank u always for the support :)
18th Jun 2014 2:11pm
Thank you AD, appreciate the support n I'm sorry
to hear you feel like that too... It's NOT a good feeling
to hear you feel like that too... It's NOT a good feeling
Anonymous
- Edited 28th Nov 2018 00:39am
30th Jun 2014 12:52pm
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30th Jun 2014 1:20pm
I've heard that before, a llloooonnggg time ago
N nope I don't know how said it either! lol
Still it's appreciated n I love anything that inspires
hope...so thank you for it n YOU. Appreciate u sweetness :)
N nope I don't know how said it either! lol
Still it's appreciated n I love anything that inspires
hope...so thank you for it n YOU. Appreciate u sweetness :)