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Music :]
it's so pleasing
to close my eyes
and listen to the music
let it soothe away the day
wash away my troubles
take away my fears
melt right into it
really feel the peace
and ride the waves
where ever they go,
what would i do
without you?
to close my eyes
and listen to the music
let it soothe away the day
wash away my troubles
take away my fears
melt right into it
really feel the peace
and ride the waves
where ever they go,
what would i do
without you?
Published 8th Jun 2014
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8th Jun 2014 00:41am
you could always continue
to simply write your own
songs, which you do so
well..:)
to simply write your own
songs, which you do so
well..:)
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8th Jun 2014 1:12pm
8th Jun 2014 1:15pm
Music has the power to heal hearts, and soothe souls....as do your lovely lyrics, my Friend!
A Scribe of Sweet Serenity--to be Sure!! :)
A Scribe of Sweet Serenity--to be Sure!! :)
8th Jun 2014 1:37pm
yes music has the power,as do your words DarkEnchantress...thank you always :)
8th Jun 2014 1:29pm
Hell yea, I feel you bro!
as the saying goes..."Music is my life"
Very nicely done :)
as the saying goes..."Music is my life"
Very nicely done :)
8th Jun 2014 1:39pm
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8th Jun 2014 3:05pm
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8th Jun 2014 5:07pm
Indeed-soak, stream, be
Beautiful energy Hash!!!
jus sharing buddy - I drift off with this much:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Jdz4MTAo7j0
Beautiful energy Hash!!!
jus sharing buddy - I drift off with this much:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Jdz4MTAo7j0
9th Jun 2014 00:31am
8th Jun 2014 10:58pm
Music makes us better people, unite us, cheer us up. Like your wonderful poems, Hash.
9th Jun 2014 00:32am
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9th Jun 2014 3:37pm
I LOVE IT!
Sometimes I like to hear it live
I can always can feel it as I dance
Wonderful!
Sometimes I like to hear it live
I can always can feel it as I dance
Wonderful!
10th Jun 2014 1:10am
Always Lena...ya gotta move to the right,ya gotta move to the left (ha,a little from the Stones) :) thanks
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19th Jul 2014 10:30pm
Music soothes and reinvigorates the soul. I like listening to hard rock while I write. Enjoyed.
20th Jul 2014 12:32pm