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dead heart waltz
wandering the way of the crow
she dances a dead heart waltz
in titanium heel louboutins
through taupe laden skies
outlined in vermillion hues
seeking acceptance
from the reflection
in the mirror
an unyielding desire
to be part of the slaughter
it is paramount
to her souls survival
feeding off painful loot
stolen from hearts of the damned
fruitlessly trying
to fill empty with empty
For the "Outside Looking In" competition...had to use these words: unyielding, paramount, crow, titanium, survival, loot, taupe
she dances a dead heart waltz
in titanium heel louboutins
through taupe laden skies
outlined in vermillion hues
seeking acceptance
from the reflection
in the mirror
an unyielding desire
to be part of the slaughter
it is paramount
to her souls survival
feeding off painful loot
stolen from hearts of the damned
fruitlessly trying
to fill empty with empty
For the "Outside Looking In" competition...had to use these words: unyielding, paramount, crow, titanium, survival, loot, taupe
Written by
DiscipleofLife
(Fenom)
Published 5th Jun 2014
| Edited 7th Jun 2014
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Anonymous
- Edited 18th Jun 2018 7:37pm
5th Jun 2014 6:39pm
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Anonymous
5th Jun 2014 9:44pm
Great submission Fenom! Can't really comment on it because of the comp.Xo
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5th Jun 2014 10:50pm
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5th Jun 2014 11:13pm
I think if I'd had to
use those words
my head would have
exploded! Excellent...
use those words
my head would have
exploded! Excellent...
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5th Jun 2014 11:28pm
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6th Jun 2014 10:35am
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8th Jun 2014 1:53am
sinister writing. she dances a dark & joyless dance, & w/o fear, like the crow...
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8th Jun 2014 1:54am
Anonymous
- Edited 23rd Oct 2019 7:38am
16th Jun 2014 2:48am
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16th Jun 2014 7:36am
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"laden skies outlined in vermillion hues." the vermillion caught my eye. Its so pretty. Good poem.
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26th Jun 2014 5:12pm
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I see a dark entity dancing in the darkness, wishing to be alive, trying to feel something, anything, again. Good write. Enjoyed.
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16th Jul 2014 10:12pm