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Pulling Legs Off Spiders
I paved the way to my soul
with broken hearts,
each one,
dead, gone and
never fucking coming back
except when I need them to,
♪ ♫ Memories, something something of my mind ♪ ♫
♪ ♫ Memories, something through the ages just like wine ♪ ♫
to haunt me is to love me
so keep the screams coming.
Stupid fucks.
{♪ ♫ partial lyrics from an Elvis song, but
mangled enough not to cause a problem ♪ ♫}
with broken hearts,
each one,
dead, gone and
never fucking coming back
except when I need them to,
♪ ♫ Memories, something something of my mind ♪ ♫
♪ ♫ Memories, something through the ages just like wine ♪ ♫
to haunt me is to love me
so keep the screams coming.
Stupid fucks.
{♪ ♫ partial lyrics from an Elvis song, but
mangled enough not to cause a problem ♪ ♫}
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Re: Pulling Legs Off Spiders
1st Jun 2014 11:19pm
This is really something else, in a good way
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I laughed too...
enjoyed...
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I laughed too...
enjoyed...
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Re: Pulling Legs Off Spiders
1st Jun 2014 11:27pm
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2nd Jun 2014 00:22am
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Re: Pulling Legs Off Spiders
2nd Jun 2014 00:46am
Re: Pulling Legs Off Spiders
2nd Jun 2014 4:00am
Raw, jagged emotion, strung together with lusciously dark imagery. Love it! Mike.
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Re: Pulling Legs Off Spiders
2nd Jun 2014 4:38am
i always use the line " if you still hate me you are thinking about me"
it's not me it's you......
jus sayin
it's good to be able to sing mad mam.......
i love it
hope it offers you the same solace
♪ ♫ Memories, something something of my mind ♪ ♫
♪ ♫ Memories, something through the ages just like wine ♪ ♫
♪ ♫ Memories, something something of my mind ♪ ♫
♪ ♫ Memories, something through the ages just like wine ♪ ♫
you kinda look like joni mitchel too!!!!!!!!
case of wine days jus sayin
total compliment
it's not me it's you......
jus sayin
it's good to be able to sing mad mam.......
i love it
hope it offers you the same solace
♪ ♫ Memories, something something of my mind ♪ ♫
♪ ♫ Memories, something through the ages just like wine ♪ ♫
♪ ♫ Memories, something something of my mind ♪ ♫
♪ ♫ Memories, something through the ages just like wine ♪ ♫
you kinda look like joni mitchel too!!!!!!!!
case of wine days jus sayin
total compliment
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2nd Jun 2014 7:58am
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2nd Jun 2014 1:09pm
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