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tears of acid..
tears of acid pour down my cheek, with a weakened voice i begin to speak.. i loved you once, i love you still, always have, always will.. but i wonder still, why i feel.. if i didnt the pain would ease and the sorrow would fade, all along i had no idea it was just a beautiful facade.. so i grab a tissue as my face grows placid, and these tears keep rolling.. these tears of acid...
Published 24th Mar 2011
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Anonymous
- Edited 15th Apr 2019 9:40pm
24th Mar 2011 8:20pm
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24th Mar 2011 8:29pm
Thanks.. it took a whole two min. To write it.. I was on the bus and was listening to a song.. and it just came to me (: I only posted it to see if my writing was worthy of DUP.... *fingers crossed* I'm still hoping I can do okay..
Anonymous
- Edited 14th May 2018 5:37pm
24th Mar 2011 10:02pm
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24th Mar 2011 10:15pm
My phone doesnt exactly give those options, but I can get on my actual computer and clean them up a little.. thanks for the advice cori (: .. definitely taken into consideration (: .. btw idk y people are so afraid of critiquing me!! (: ur the only one tht has so far (: .. I admire tht, thanks again ..
24th Mar 2011 10:59pm
I love this it says so much in such few words.. Reminds of me when I was a teen.. Very good now I'm going to go read the rest of your poems
24th Mar 2011 11:04pm
I'm inspired daily by different things (: even you guys here in DU inspire me.. whether the inspiration be sadness, hatred, anger, love, heart break, or even happiness .. its there.. thank you (: its comforting to kno someone likes my work (:
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