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even though i shouldn't be
what happened to my love poems about you?
what happened to my love poems about you?
what happened to my love poems about you?!
you've made me sound like
my mother
oh god
i sound like my fucking mother!
"wah wah wah
my feelings this
my feelings that."
on and on
the insanity of this
roles
insatiable bitching
i can not keep in
explodes.
"you should of done this
you should of done that
ah you're fucking useless
karma i deserve
from my past."
what happened?
what's wrong with me?
either way
i'm sorry
.
what happened to my love poems about you?
what happened to my love poems about you?!
you've made me sound like
my mother
oh god
i sound like my fucking mother!
"wah wah wah
my feelings this
my feelings that."
on and on
the insanity of this
roles
insatiable bitching
i can not keep in
explodes.
"you should of done this
you should of done that
ah you're fucking useless
karma i deserve
from my past."
what happened?
what's wrong with me?
either way
i'm sorry
.
Published 26th May 2014
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- Edited 15th May 2018 9:39pm
27th May 2014 4:29am
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27th May 2014 6:08am
I have a feeling I've felt this way before. Either way, great poem.
- Paige Rider.
- Paige Rider.
27th May 2014 2:27pm
piss on ma's whinery.......then 4give her & leave'er lone for a few years
or sum shit......
a great de-scription of
asspaining
idiot parentry
28th May 2014 1:48am
"Of all the words of mouth or pen, the saddest are these: I sound like my parents." I'm paraphrasing, of course. I can't help but laugh at this poem, and I do apologize that I'm so caught up in the humor of your comparison of yourself to your mother that I can't foreseeably comment on anything more worthwhile.
