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A tale as old as time
The time has come
I have to let you go
Loving you has caused me so much pain
for years,
but you don't see it
you have never seen it
I'm doing what I have to do
and if you take a look at yourself
you would know what I say is true
I have something special to give
to someone who is true
I don't understand your ways
I never have.
I want to believe in love
I don't believe in it with you
I can't imagine continuing this way
I appreciate that you finally see it too
now WE can finally let go
I will fly and grow
I have to let you go
Loving you has caused me so much pain
for years,
but you don't see it
you have never seen it
I'm doing what I have to do
and if you take a look at yourself
you would know what I say is true
I have something special to give
to someone who is true
I don't understand your ways
I never have.
I want to believe in love
I don't believe in it with you
I can't imagine continuing this way
I appreciate that you finally see it too
now WE can finally let go
I will fly and grow
Published 25th May 2014
| Edited 27th May 2014
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25th May 2014 7:05pm
Oh, I can so feel you, Lena. This is a sad but hopeful and wonderful piece and I'D love to see you fly and grow! Spread your wings!
25th May 2014 7:40pm
Thank you Miss Chi!
Your encouraging words touched my heart as if to help heal....my wings are spread and I'm about to take off to feel the wind.
Your encouraging words touched my heart as if to help heal....my wings are spread and I'm about to take off to feel the wind.
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25th May 2014 7:38pm
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25th May 2014 7:45pm
Aww Rose, your comments always make me smile
When I read your poems, I feel beauty and calm, playful and naughty......I have decided, it's time to find the REAL thing.
When I read your poems, I feel beauty and calm, playful and naughty......I have decided, it's time to find the REAL thing.
Anonymous
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25th May 2014 7:49pm
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26th May 2014 00:48am
it's a wise decision, to leave the place where there is no happiness, & fly on in the hopes of finding it...
27th May 2014 2:14am
Thank you John!
It's always an honor
It was a smart decision and we both agreed.
It's always an honor
It was a smart decision and we both agreed.
Anonymous
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26th May 2014 5:43am
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27th May 2014 2:19am
Thank you so much flowergirl...your kind words have also touched my soul....it helps to releave my feelings and this helped.
Always a pleasure to see your comment
Thanks for your support ; )
Always a pleasure to see your comment
Thanks for your support ; )
26th May 2014 6:27am
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27th May 2014 2:26am
Your comment has me wondering Mr Hawk
Thank you and yes it had to be said.
Thank you and yes it had to be said.
27th May 2014 3:39am
27th May 2014 1:34pm
"I have something special to give
to someone who is true " Yes you do...unfortunately but fortunately many of us have to learn the hard way in learning who really appreciates our love!! Enjoyed this..sad but uplifting in that those wings will be spreading!
to someone who is true " Yes you do...unfortunately but fortunately many of us have to learn the hard way in learning who really appreciates our love!! Enjoyed this..sad but uplifting in that those wings will be spreading!
28th May 2014 2:38am