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come...
take my attentive firm hand
we will walk together
through cobweb lace halls
that echo with bone-chime melodies
from memories past
free your stoic heart
of this gargoyle stare
let them crumble when awakened
from perpetual twilight slumber
this lucent new dawn
will devour trusted shadows
warming long indifferent spaces
as two hearts become one
gaze into ardent light
let it linger on our faces
as it fades haunted scars
from memories past
we will walk together
through cobweb lace halls
that echo with bone-chime melodies
from memories past
free your stoic heart
of this gargoyle stare
let them crumble when awakened
from perpetual twilight slumber
this lucent new dawn
will devour trusted shadows
warming long indifferent spaces
as two hearts become one
gaze into ardent light
let it linger on our faces
as it fades haunted scars
from memories past
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25th May 2014 9:16am
Thanks so much for stopping buy Le Fay. And such kind words, I'm glad you enjoy our growing adornment. Very well said =)
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25th May 2014 1:24pm
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my friend,that felt like you wrapped me in a warm blanket and told me everything will be alright
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25th May 2014 3:52pm
what an amazing comment hashman, because that was the intention sir! Thanks for stopping by...
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25th May 2014 6:41pm
Beautiful Write Fenom!!!
besides the emotive impact this delivers, the rhythm kicks it in high gear -Awesome Sir!!!
besides the emotive impact this delivers, the rhythm kicks it in high gear -Awesome Sir!!!
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25th May 2014 6:43pm
thanks so much for stopping in souladareatease...and the kind words sir...
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30th May 2014 11:02pm
Walking through memories may bring up pain and bones long forgotten. Enjoyed it.
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3rd Jun 2014 4:15am
I literally lol'd at your comment...
thanks so much for the visit and kind observation fetuspancakes... ;)
thanks so much for the visit and kind observation fetuspancakes... ;)