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I'm just an angel
What I am doing
Here among devils and ghouls
Why punish me now?
I'm just an angel
During all my pure long life
Inside the City
Never killed a man
Nor abused any woman
Nor stolen a child
Just played with money
Of other guys and lost it
In what were seconds
Only five billion
Dollars from trusting people
Also from my bank
You think I must be
In hell because of this game?
And I deserve hell?
Was in comp "Haikus of Hell"
Published 23rd May 2014
| Edited 25th May 2014
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25th May 2014 00:47am
No angels in the City...
Great twist on the comp theme, though, Malin. Good luck!
Great twist on the comp theme, though, Malin. Good luck!
25th May 2014 2:45am
Sure, no angel in the City. This poem is in reference with Jerôme Kerviel, a french trader who spoiled 5 billions of Euros in a few seconds... And try, after judgment, to get the image of an angel, for the people, saying it is his employer, a big french bank who decided this action...
Pedro had helped me to make corrections, but unfortunately, I don't win... Not a problem for me, just a competition.
Thank you, Atakti for your comment, and to Pedro for his help!
Pedro had helped me to make corrections, but unfortunately, I don't win... Not a problem for me, just a competition.
Thank you, Atakti for your comment, and to Pedro for his help!
