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Frayed Rope
I fell,
over the cliff in
this love affair
I held on to
the ties that bind
grasping for leverage
in this vertical
incline
while watching
the frayed rope
that entwined
my heart to his
unravel
one thread at a time ~
over the cliff in
this love affair
I held on to
the ties that bind
grasping for leverage
in this vertical
incline
while watching
the frayed rope
that entwined
my heart to his
unravel
one thread at a time ~
Published 21st May 2014
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21st May 2014 9:08pm
I like how the structure looks like both the cliff and the frayed rope...
and the occasional rhyming is fun.
The metaphor is apt, in situations such as this.
and the occasional rhyming is fun.
The metaphor is apt, in situations such as this.
22nd May 2014 2:49am
I want to thank you for your commenting on my page Atakti! I'm honored, truly.
Yes, I didn't stray from the old tried and true with this one. It was a tweet originally.
Thank you!
much love!
Yes, I didn't stray from the old tried and true with this one. It was a tweet originally.
Thank you!
much love!
21st May 2014 11:16pm
22nd May 2014 2:42am
Anonymous
22nd May 2014 4:46am
"I held on to
the ties that bind
grasping for leverage
in this vertical
incline"<--in love with that!
Pen Love Glynis...Xo
the ties that bind
grasping for leverage
in this vertical
incline"<--in love with that!
Pen Love Glynis...Xo
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