Commenting Preference:
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21st May 2014 10:15am
sounds like the casual
sadism of a cat I once
had..! although I've
known people worse...
sadism of a cat I once
had..! although I've
known people worse...
22nd May 2014 7:29pm
Yeah, people are mostly
worse than animals since
they are calculating and
cruel on purpose.
Good to know that you know.
worse than animals since
they are calculating and
cruel on purpose.
Good to know that you know.
Anonymous
- Edited 15th May 2018 9:39pm
21st May 2014 3:17pm
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22nd May 2014 7:39pm
Yes, you're right, Fay, I recently read a senryu with the title 'Wounded' after I posted 'Prey' and referred to wounds :-). Perhaps it's spring and love and lost love - who knows that animates us to ponder about similar topics. It's interesting, isn't it?
21st May 2014 10:18pm
22nd May 2014 7:41pm
Glad you love it, Lance! Would you love to be the predator or rather be hunted down by a sexy woman? Sometimes it's not that bad to be the prey :-).
24th May 2014 8:05pm
24th May 2014 8:27pm
Anonymous
- Edited 14th May 2018 10:07pm
21st May 2014 11:47pm
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22nd May 2014 7:43pm
Yes, Gabriel. Humans wound just for fun. And that's in vain. Why hurt others? What's the purpose of that?
22nd May 2014 5:29am
22nd May 2014 7:49pm
It is if the players are of the same value. Oftentimes the predator just rips out an inferior heart for fun.
22nd May 2014 8:27am
I know you're speaking of romantic predators ... But having recently been bent over and raped by the federal and state government for tax payments ... I saw this piece in another light
22nd May 2014 7:51pm
Hahaha sweet LSP! You made me laugh out loud! I bet you see this poem in a different light now! I so agree with you!!!
22nd May 2014 5:41pm
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22nd May 2014 11:35pm
Happy to read that, sharneindium. Always glad when my message seems to be conveyed properly.
23rd May 2014 11:46am
Hey lady I ONLY prey on the willing!
I resent...HUH? OHHH u weren't referring to me!!?? Oh, damn well nevermind lol... Seriously, another
Concise, strong spill! :)
I resent...HUH? OHHH u weren't referring to me!!?? Oh, damn well nevermind lol... Seriously, another
Concise, strong spill! :)
Sweety! You weren't meant since the one to whom I referred is anti-social. You don't seem anti-social to me :-). Thanks for your attention, dear Poe :-)!
25th May 2014 7:21pm
26th May 2014 10:21pm
Yes, Sarah, people can be cruel and abusive. Thank you so much for your comment!