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wounded - senryu

undulating lines..
blurred by dominations voice..
abuse surfaces..

Written by 7th_son

Published 21st May 2014

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Re: wounded - senryu

21st May 2014 7:33am

As a haiku/senryu lover I'm fascinated by this one beyond surface.

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21st May 2014 12:25pm

I think most will just read the surface on this one.. Glad it was preceved as intended..

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