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Unsurrendered
Upon a moment
Undetected
Like a waft of subtle flowers
Unexpected
The softness of tranquility
In this moment unpredicted
You entered unsurrendered
to clothe my soul
In peace
Undetected
Like a waft of subtle flowers
Unexpected
The softness of tranquility
In this moment unpredicted
You entered unsurrendered
to clothe my soul
In peace
Published 20th May 2014
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20th May 2014 8:37pm
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21st May 2014 9:31pm
20th May 2014 8:54pm
Glynis this is really beautiful and makes one reflect. " Like a waft of subtle flowers". I love that line. Excellent writing.
20th May 2014 9:12pm
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20th May 2014 9:49pm
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21st May 2014 1:47am
Writes like these always keep You a Favorite Dear Glynis-Glad to see You roaming town again!!!
22nd May 2014 2:39am
Anonymous
21st May 2014 3:01am
Your pen has been burning beauty upon pages as of late Glynis. :)
Wonderful ink, my lovely friend...Xo
Wonderful ink, my lovely friend...Xo
22nd May 2014 2:40am