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Left in darkness
You ever felt so lonely
That the space you're contained in, is so cold
As the pressure in your chest is rising, so you reach
No knobs for release
Their should be a light at the end of the tunnel
but you don't know where to began
It's so blurry
Do I go straight ahead ?
Or
Do I go back down more ?
I have to get out of here
the decisions still remain
the search continues for a new road
That the space you're contained in, is so cold
As the pressure in your chest is rising, so you reach
No knobs for release
Their should be a light at the end of the tunnel
but you don't know where to began
It's so blurry
Do I go straight ahead ?
Or
Do I go back down more ?
I have to get out of here
the decisions still remain
the search continues for a new road
Published 18th May 2014
| Edited 19th May 2014
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Anonymous
19th May 2014 7:36pm
...sometimes it's not about finding a new road, but moreso about endurance and strength during your walk on the old one.
....your 'Will' and determination to see the light in the darkness, creates a new road. :) I really enjoyed this, m_cak....Xo
....your 'Will' and determination to see the light in the darkness, creates a new road. :) I really enjoyed this, m_cak....Xo
19th May 2014 8:06pm
28th May 2014 4:03pm
In answer to the first question...yes
As for the rest of the piece, I felt the uncertainty
n dark lonely feelings here... Very well penned lady! :)
As for the rest of the piece, I felt the uncertainty
n dark lonely feelings here... Very well penned lady! :)
