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Last breath
I will follow you until my last breath
kiss you until my lips are soared
caress your body until my fingers go numb
engrave your name in my skin
tease you in my dreams
love you until my heart bleeds
forever our soul will meet
eternally we will always be
In love
you and me
kiss you until my lips are soared
caress your body until my fingers go numb
engrave your name in my skin
tease you in my dreams
love you until my heart bleeds
forever our soul will meet
eternally we will always be
In love
you and me
Published 15th May 2014
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- Edited 27th Aug 2021 5:37pm
15th May 2014 5:22pm
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15th May 2014 6:33pm
15th May 2014 5:50pm
I agree with poet! It has a nice subtle flow. I am glad to be in a place where "engrave your name in my skin" is an appropaite expression of love! That being said, I also like the way it borders on obsession... May be just me, but I really like it.
15th May 2014 6:34pm
Anonymous
15th May 2014 10:58pm
Love the inhaling of your last breath, Liz! :)
21st May 2014 3:07pm