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Raw Dream

Living up to a golden goal that everyone knows,
a bit difficult to unfold because of the people you told,
so close you were
but obstacles you call friends are pretenders
who keep defending success from you.

From you they keep...success...
from you they take
from you happiness they gain
from you
to you
for you their love they fake
yet in them your trust remains,
you not being stupid you being human
but today your face you cant face
in the mirror
because all you see is pain tracing
all around your presence
because you dreamt
and shared your dreams before starting your chase
now there's nothing to embrace coz obstacles you call friends
are playing defence.

All you have left is a raw dream and a rusty goal
Written by TheTaplow (Taplow)
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