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Ouch
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Ouch
Stepped on a mesquite thorn
Went through the top of my foot
Reminds me of you
Written by
hawkdude
Published
10th May 2014
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Re: Ouch
Anonymous
11th May 2014 10:15pm
.....sounds like a painful person.... Xo
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Re: Ouch
hawkdude
11th May 2014 10:41pm
Every step reminds me
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Re: Ouch
hawkdude
12th May 2014 12:08pm
They are old wounds miss
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hawkdude
4th Jun 2014 3:59pm
But we must be careful where we step!
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Re: Ouch
AspiringLibrarian
3rd Jun 2014 10:12pm
I like this poem. It's almost an anti-haiku. Here's hoping you never get another pain in the foot! Whether that pain be thorn- or lover-delivered... (By the way, thank you for teaching me a new word in "mesquite".)
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