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Drink from me
Drink from me
Take out your hunger to satisfy
Taste from the very depths
my need waits there hidden
waiting to surrender
Your presence felt close at hand
order it all and more you shall receive
my revealing need begs to be taken
Teach me everything
Drink from me baby
Published 8th May 2014
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8th May 2014 2:05pm
8th May 2014 2:15pm
Anonymous
8th May 2014 2:06pm
Very nice....beautiful submission. Wow
8th May 2014 2:20pm
it's the act of submitting everything
acting out his wishes
as he's also in that submissive position
but taking control still as he feeds on me
just sends shockwaves through me everytime
acting out his wishes
as he's also in that submissive position
but taking control still as he feeds on me
just sends shockwaves through me everytime
8th May 2014 2:58pm
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8th May 2014 6:51pm
no poetry was needed
we all can see
the love you like to give
to please
orgasming in his eyes
as lips go dry
and he sucks
every ounce of juice
then you will suck him hard too
till no drop of sperms are left to ensue
dry him ere
he dries
and in loving arms
dies....
just for a wee wee wee
while
we all can see
the love you like to give
to please
orgasming in his eyes
as lips go dry
and he sucks
every ounce of juice
then you will suck him hard too
till no drop of sperms are left to ensue
dry him ere
he dries
and in loving arms
dies....
just for a wee wee wee
while
8th May 2014 7:10pm
9th May 2014 4:51am
I turned off the vanilla and switched on the yellow. If you get what I mean. A little bit of watersports never hurt anybody. Well written.
9th May 2014 9:54am
like your take on it
everyone sees something different and thats a cool thing
:)
everyone sees something different and thats a cool thing
:)