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for you..
as i sit in the corner if my room, i begin to write this poem for you.. ive been stuck on it for a while, and when i talk to you, i cant help but smile.. im glad i found someone i can relate to.. im glad i found.. you
Published 20th Mar 2011
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20th Mar 2011 11:46pm
21st Mar 2011 00:22am
i have two suggestions for you:
1. is it a typo "if" ? - it's not really a suggestions anw -
2. write your poetry in verses it makes it easier to read as its poetry not prose
1. is it a typo "if" ? - it's not really a suggestions anw -
2. write your poetry in verses it makes it easier to read as its poetry not prose
21st Mar 2011 00:27am
Yes sorry if is a typo, its supposed to be of.. and I can't do verses.. my phone doesn't allow it unless I space it a billion times through.. but thnx for critique (:
22nd Mar 2011 10:41am
4th Apr 2011 6:15am
I have a wondering mind,
This, i realize,
is probably about Austin.
Egh, everywhere i go its you & him
This, i realize,
is probably about Austin.
Egh, everywhere i go its you & him
6th Apr 2011 9:45pm
