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Seething Trails
This she-wolf runs free from the pack. Her mate follows
closer than a shadow. Wild finds its blood.
Fierce and low, she rips the underside of desecration
then comes back for bones, crunched in feral lust.
Night lopes bring the sharp, cold light of the moon
and howls from grime. Growls herald the lunge —
she severs the throats of torpid meatheads.
The moon eclipse allows her reign, a silver streak dash
of fierce justice. Though she denies loyalty, she chooses
her chains vigilantly. Some dare to skim her pelt,
few hands withdraw unscathed, until drum beats urge her on.
Entry in DU Member Miss_Sub comp
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Re: Seething Trails
7th May 2014 5:59am
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7th May 2014 3:38pm
Anonymous
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7th May 2014 9:01am
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7th May 2014 3:38pm
Glad you came along for this one, Mourganna. Wanna howl at the moon together?
:)
:)
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8th May 2014 9:46am
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re: Re: Seething Trails
7th May 2014 3:39pm
Cheers, Missy - as long as you like it, that's the main thing.
I remember you mentioned wolves once...
:)
I remember you mentioned wolves once...
:)
Re: Seething Trails
7th May 2014 11:25am
Wow! I can practically see those canines dripping with blood - giving her life with the mere scent ...
I love this! (go figure)
Good luck in comp!
I love this! (go figure)
Good luck in comp!
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7th May 2014 3:40pm
Re: Seething Trails
7th May 2014 12:16pm
Language is beautiful. Ambitious, and executed seemingly effortlessly... Great imagery n all that too.
Quite enjoyed
Quite enjoyed
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7th May 2014 3:41pm
Re: Seething Trails
8th May 2014 2:33pm
You sound 'hungry, like the wolf' lol
Awesomely depicted my dear friend :)
Awesomely depicted my dear friend :)
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9th May 2014 6:41am
Re: Seething Trails
10th May 2014 4:02am
I like missy even more now that I know she's a werewolf! Just remind me to avoid her on full moons, probably has bad breath. Were you reading kelley Armstrong before you wrote this by any chance?
I wanted to write in the comp but somehow everything I tried to write sounded borderline creepy to me, I guess I can't write about people :(
I wanted to write in the comp but somehow everything I tried to write sounded borderline creepy to me, I guess I can't write about people :(
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re: Re: Seething Trails
11th May 2014 6:47pm
Hahaha, bad breath, you crack me up...
I don't know Kelley Armstrong, will look her up.
Dys, there is still time to enter the comp. You could portray a slobering fan, why not? lol
Thanks for stopping by!
I don't know Kelley Armstrong, will look her up.
Dys, there is still time to enter the comp. You could portray a slobering fan, why not? lol
Thanks for stopping by!
Re: Seething Trails
11th May 2014 10:35am
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11th May 2014 6:48pm
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11th May 2014 6:48pm
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14th May 2014 8:39pm
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re: Re: Seething Trails
14th May 2014 10:08pm
Well, now, eagle-eye, there may be something in that...
;)
Thanks for your comment!
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Thanks for your comment!