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fervent shadoe
patchwork vision
plays a dysmorphic game
of alabaster beauty
lost and found
drifting in a deadpan gaze
cascading memories
of iron maiden affection
suppress box-cutter blues
impaled by betrayal
her soul yearns to dance
the black swan pas de deux
writing forsaken heart passages
in aphotic love diaries
exploring the depths
of her velvet talon devotion
plays a dysmorphic game
of alabaster beauty
lost and found
drifting in a deadpan gaze
cascading memories
of iron maiden affection
suppress box-cutter blues
impaled by betrayal
her soul yearns to dance
the black swan pas de deux
writing forsaken heart passages
in aphotic love diaries
exploring the depths
of her velvet talon devotion
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Anonymous
- Edited 18th Jun 2018 7:37pm
4th May 2014 9:03am
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Re: fervent shadoe
It was inspired by the passion in your amazing writing, and the little bit I know of you.
And it is my pleasure...
And it is my pleasure...
Anonymous
- Edited 15th May 2018 9:39pm
4th May 2014 11:01am
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4th May 2014 11:21am
Re: fervent shadoe
4th May 2014 11:56pm
there's a hard and cold
beauty here, and it is
so softly done that it
moves like a swan..:)
beauty here, and it is
so softly done that it
moves like a swan..:)
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Re: fervent shadoe
Thanks for reading Paul. That's pretty much to tone I was looking for, thx for the feeback...
Anonymous
- Edited 15th Apr 2019 9:40pm
5th May 2014 4:00pm
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Re: fervent shadoe
5th May 2014 4:03pm
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Anonymous
6th May 2014 9:06pm
"patchwork vision
plays a dysmorphic game
of alabaster beauty
lost and found"<- fav.
Beautiful ink there sir....Xo
plays a dysmorphic game
of alabaster beauty
lost and found"<- fav.
Beautiful ink there sir....Xo
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Re: fervent shadoe
6th May 2014 9:41pm
Anonymous
- Edited 23rd Oct 2019 7:38am
7th May 2014 1:37am
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Re: fervent shadoe
7th May 2014 2:23am