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when your not here :(short nothings):
Though not here in my embrace,
Still every breath fills me with your life
And its beautiful like the sun
shining through heaven
Still every breath fills me with your life
And its beautiful like the sun
shining through heaven
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30th Apr 2014 3:26am
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re: Re: when your not here :(short nothings):
30th Apr 2014 4:14am
Awe...im so grateful for your poetic comment...
Hahaha your comment/reply seem longer than my actual poem lol hard...
Im smiling with inspiration girl:)
Hahaha your comment/reply seem longer than my actual poem lol hard...
Im smiling with inspiration girl:)
Re: when your not here :(short nothings):
30th Apr 2014 5:21am
u love embrace
I hate disgrace
so I do all
under cover
of darkness
and bedsheets
where no lights
are needed
like on
dim streets
every thing is open beneath!
I hate disgrace
so I do all
under cover
of darkness
and bedsheets
where no lights
are needed
like on
dim streets
every thing is open beneath!
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re: Re: when your not here :(short nothings):
30th Apr 2014 5:46am
Awe wow...im honored for the poetic feedback,
That was so cool...just like the previous poetic comment from Flowergirl....its longer than my poem lol hard
Really lmao now
NEXT!!!!
That was so cool...just like the previous poetic comment from Flowergirl....its longer than my poem lol hard
Really lmao now
NEXT!!!!
re: re: Re: when your not here :(short nothings):
1st May 2014 9:04am
Re: when your not here :(short nothings):
30th Apr 2014 1:34pm
re: Re: when your not here :(short nothings):
1st May 2014 1:00am
Re: when your not here :(short nothings):
Anonymous
30th Apr 2014 7:19pm
...short nothings become long somethings, if allowed.. :)
Me likes, me likes a lot....Xo
Me likes, me likes a lot....Xo
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re: Re: when your not here :(short nothings):
1st May 2014 1:02am
Woohoo ya likes, ya likes
Thanking you my greatness
Short nothings = long something's
Hehehe
Thanking you my greatness
Short nothings = long something's
Hehehe