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Bathing in Fire
water droplets
skim rampantly
like gasoline
down
down
down
down
tracing molten
silhouettes
then lingering
momentarily
at the small
of my back
they're foiled
by slick tiles;
the clean slates
which provide
no purchase,
besides to project
whims and fantasy
these visions won't stop
until i gasp for last breaths
these eyes won't open
until i'm forever engulfed
i n f l a m e s
Published 28th Apr 2014
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28th Apr 2014 8:47pm
So intense! Wow.
Alternative title: Passion and the Rubber Ducky
(silly mood, sorry, hehehe, your poem rocks!)
Alternative title: Passion and the Rubber Ducky
(silly mood, sorry, hehehe, your poem rocks!)
28th Apr 2014 8:48pm
"Rubber Ducky: The Passionate Arsonist"
I'm also in a silly mood, and as always many thanks!
I'm also in a silly mood, and as always many thanks!
28th Apr 2014 8:47pm
i can never get the temperature right either
*cue observational stand up*
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*cue observational stand up*
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13th May 2014 9:53am
best piece ive read so far.....great work miss G.....reading this makes me grasp the reality of the long journey ahead of me to achieve such writing...awesome read
13th May 2014 4:40pm
Many thanks Dawn. I too still feel the same way when I read pieces by poets I admire greatly. Everyone here is on a journey; ever learning and evolving the ways in which we write. I wish you luck. The best advice I can give is READ a lot.