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Simply confusion
blissful words
saucy actions
temperamental rage
egotistical feats
you…
lovely features
haunting views
overwhelming wants
desirable treats
you…
undeniable charms
tempting qualities
blazing thoughts
graceful deeds
you…
tortured mind
rotten schemes
vengeful actions
narcissistic needs
you...
Simply
Confusion
saucy actions
temperamental rage
egotistical feats
you…
lovely features
haunting views
overwhelming wants
desirable treats
you…
undeniable charms
tempting qualities
blazing thoughts
graceful deeds
you…
tortured mind
rotten schemes
vengeful actions
narcissistic needs
you...
Simply
Confusion
Published 13th Oct 2009
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13th Oct 2009 8:48am
I love the development in this piece.
What makes it so good is that I can relate by putting someone in the place of your subject.
Did you have a person in mind when you wrote it?
What makes it so good is that I can relate by putting someone in the place of your subject.
Did you have a person in mind when you wrote it?
13th Oct 2009 11:04pm
i sure did... yet after writing it i found myself thinking about me lol.... we all have a little of this in us... thanks for commenting
