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Unfaithful
Never should of kissed you
You never should of stayed
What was I thinking even looking your way
Your unforgivable fruit
Your hers to play
And I'm his in every single way
I shouldn't of looked your way
I tell myself that every fucking
Day
It was my loneliness
It got the best of me
My heart was to weak
But In love I shouldn't have fall
Now everything i knew is fading to black
I think I deserve it for always going back
You never should of stayed
What was I thinking even looking your way
Your unforgivable fruit
Your hers to play
And I'm his in every single way
I shouldn't of looked your way
I tell myself that every fucking
Day
It was my loneliness
It got the best of me
My heart was to weak
But In love I shouldn't have fall
Now everything i knew is fading to black
I think I deserve it for always going back
Published 18th Mar 2011
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Anonymous
18th Mar 2011 2:27am
.......in a very poetic way and I think many of us have been down this road. A powerful description that I hope is not to "autobiographical"
18th Mar 2011 2:45am
Who u telling it's hard lol.. And I plead the fifth I'm a lady a lady never tells lol
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Anonymous
18th Mar 2011 5:52pm
Well stated. : )
18th Mar 2011 7:16pm
19th Mar 2011 6:05am
I like it, its something i think about everyday, but dont no how to put it to paper, It really showed me that someone else feels the exact way i do right now, i like it :)
19th Mar 2011 11:30am
4th Apr 2011 4:08pm
Hmm.. i liked this. It's something that happens to alot of people. It's real
4th Apr 2011 4:13pm
21st Jan 2013 8:18pm
Hmmm ... Blame as you subconsciously suggest in the piece ... Rests in the mirror methinks JG .... ???
We all know what we're doing and when the lonely phases set in, it gets hard, but, once you've recognized ...
Better out than in ....
Fuk crowds ... please yourself girl ...
Those NOT pleased, are more than likely, in such predicaments, in all probability !!!!
We all know what we're doing and when the lonely phases set in, it gets hard, but, once you've recognized ...
Better out than in ....
Fuk crowds ... please yourself girl ...
Those NOT pleased, are more than likely, in such predicaments, in all probability !!!!
21st Jan 2013 9:35pm