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I love you strongly
A beautiful smile
Under two wonderful eyes
Your marvellous face
I love you strongly, Gabi
I miss you so much, love
Hey my fair lady
With two large golden earings
And a sweet small nose
I love you strongly, Gabi
I miss you so much, love
Lovely body
With silky skin and nice nips
A pretty belly
I love you strongly, Gabi
I miss you so much, love
And your true jewel
We find between your two legs
Heaven of pleasure
I love you strongly, Gabi
I miss you so much, love
Published 25th Apr 2014
| Edited 26th Apr 2014
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Anonymous
- Edited 16th May 2018 11:39am
26th Apr 2014 00:28am
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26th Apr 2014 8:39am
Yes, sure, always strong! And thank you to help me to correct this mistake! I'll do the same for you some day (à charge de revanche, in french)!
Anonymous
- Edited 23rd Oct 2019 7:38am
26th Apr 2014 2:08am
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26th Apr 2014 8:52am
Yes true, and I made a mistake, as PM said me. Yes sure, come from my heart, and I love this style Renku ou Haiku or Senryu!
In fact, as engineer/mathematician in geometry, I love to write structured poetry. And I really am very amazed by pure poetry, without structure! We have here some talentuous poets and I am very impressed by those poetry I am unable to write...
In fact, as engineer/mathematician in geometry, I love to write structured poetry. And I really am very amazed by pure poetry, without structure! We have here some talentuous poets and I am very impressed by those poetry I am unable to write...
26th Apr 2014 8:48am
26th Apr 2014 8:55am
Not really retrospective love. But I understand what you mean. Thank you to read and comment, Solomon, I am honored by your visit.
26th Apr 2014 9:00am
Thought it was retrospective because of the chorus line "I miss you so much". Re-read this and realise you may be missing her because you are presently apart and look forward to meeting again. Beautiful honour for Gabi, with the pic.
26th Apr 2014 9:14am
Oh yes, true! We are so far and our love is not easy because of distance. But we love poetry together and a good vector for our feeling to the other!
28th Apr 2014 8:01am
28th Apr 2014 5:47pm