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Sublime achievement

Chatting together is delicious
Talking about our lifes so far
And our feelings to the other
Very close, strong and high

And a sudden light provocates
A delicious desire to take you
In my arms, to kiss your face
To whisper sweetness in your ears

Then caressing your silky skin
Gives me a strong excitation
In all my body from top to toes
And I feel that you have the same

Kissing your neck, you moan
"Oh yes, my love, come on
Give me all your love for me
I'll offer all my devotion for you"

And as a pray, we melt our bodies
In a strongest fusion of our souls
Our minds, for a unique call
To our intensive pleasure

Sublime achievement
Of our fantastic love

Written by malin69

(malin)

Published 24th Apr 2014

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Re: Sublime achievement

scarletvelvet

- Edited 24th Apr 2014 10:58pm

24th Apr 2014 10:56pm

Your poem is a "sublime achievement" indeed. Your love and erotic poems are some of the best here on DU and this one belongs in that category also.... The reader can virtually feel the love you have for her and the love you have for one another..... Exquisite erotic love poem!!! :) ♡♡♡