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Forgive Me Father
I gave away my sins today
in my heart
they were left to rot
on my soul
they were taken a toll
stepped inside the box
opened all the locks
washed away my fears
I will shed no more tears
like blood and water gushing
I felt a finger touching
I felt love rushing
filling my emptiness
shinning on me a light
telling me it's alright
resting my despair
knowing how much
he truly cares.
in my heart
they were left to rot
on my soul
they were taken a toll
stepped inside the box
opened all the locks
washed away my fears
I will shed no more tears
like blood and water gushing
I felt a finger touching
I felt love rushing
filling my emptiness
shinning on me a light
telling me it's alright
resting my despair
knowing how much
he truly cares.
Published 24th Apr 2014
| Edited 25th Apr 2014
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24th Apr 2014 3:38pm
24th Apr 2014 5:08pm
Anonymous
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24th Apr 2014 3:47pm
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24th Apr 2014 5:10pm
Anonymous
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24th Apr 2014 4:01pm
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24th Apr 2014 5:11pm
24th Apr 2014 9:17pm
This poem leaves one feeling good :), I totally like it. Very well written
25th Apr 2014 2:06am
24th Apr 2014 11:10pm
Perhaps.....
it is only
when we are
truly able
to forgive--
to let go
entirely--
does our spirit receive
its wings.....
and at long last we are able to soar!
My friend, this piece leaves me in the serenity of smiles!
Inked with Inspiration!
it is only
when we are
truly able
to forgive--
to let go
entirely--
does our spirit receive
its wings.....
and at long last we are able to soar!
My friend, this piece leaves me in the serenity of smiles!
Inked with Inspiration!
25th Apr 2014 2:09am
DarkEnchantress your words are always uplifting to me...keep on smiling (thank you always)
Anonymous
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25th Apr 2014 1:52am
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25th Apr 2014 10:19pm
That's haunting stuff and gives me goose flesh in its beauty and serenity. Like it much, Hash. Soothes my hurting heart.
26th Apr 2014 1:17am
Very happy to soothe your heart and rouse your spirit Miss Chi (thank you always)
13th May 2014 11:13pm
It's a relief to let all the grief finally go. I know. Well said and I truly agree.
14th May 2014 00:36am